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mithen

FIC: Forsaking All Others

Jan 09, 2009 22:27

Title: Forsaking All Others
Characters/Pairings: Kal/Bruce
Rating: PG
Summary: Kal and Bruce prepare to be Nightwing and Flamebird and Bruce teaches Kal something he didn't know about Kryptonian society. A continuation of the From This Day Forward series.
Word count: 3000
Notes: For rai_daydreamer 's birthday and as a thank you for all the inspiration.

( You know perfectly well such indecent exposure will be remarked on. )

ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, series: from this day forward, p: clark/bruce

Comments 54

schnuffichen January 9 2009, 13:56:54 UTC

Ooooh, that was sooo good :D

I was feeling so sorry for our boys with their suppressed desires - poor guys!

But yay for the end :)

mithen January 9 2009, 14:46:01 UTC

*grin* I think they almost enjoy the challenge of operating in such a closed society. But yeah, there isn't much chance for public displays at all! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting!

genclay January 9 2009, 14:11:26 UTC

Lovely Fic!

Great mix of social commentary of this interpretation of Kryptoain Life, cute Ace and Krypto play and hot as hell public hand striping. Naughty Bruce! And Clark, you pervert! Enjoying these human ways.

Great bit of fun for a Friday afternoon.

mithen January 9 2009, 14:51:32 UTC

Hand strip teases for the win! LOL, I wish I could have filmed that somehow, I think it took forever in motion but I couldn't exactly dwell on it for three paragraphs. :) I'm having so much fun with Kryptonian culture in this one--in some ways I like it, it's very cultured and subtle, just...no touching. :)

Thanks for commenting!

seiberwing January 9 2009, 14:45:57 UTC

To the Kal cave!

And of course even the caves have to be better than normal Earth caves, in fitting with the Kryptonians themselves.

mithen January 9 2009, 14:55:06 UTC

Super-sparkly caves! Not exactly what Bruce saw himself working in--it's going to be hard to brood surrounded by glitter--but I think he'll get by. :)

ranger_girl0301 January 9 2009, 15:46:53 UTC

Love this series! So very happy to see more of it!!

mithen January 10 2009, 01:33:44 UTC

I always enjoy writing this series! Glad to hear you like the results. :)

elenorasweet January 9 2009, 15:49:58 UTC

Omg, more from my favourite Kal!fic! *hugs you* Thankyouthankyou! I can't wait to see them step out into the world, and kick Lex's butt. And the bar scene... so damn erotic, without atcually being anything to us, it was gorgeous!

mithen January 10 2009, 01:37:34 UTC

I want to see them defeat Lex too! Now I just need to...figure out Lex's plans, lol, so they can defeat them. I'm glad you liked the bar scene, it was so fun to write!