Clarity of Vision, Chapter 6

[mithen]

Title: Clarity of Vision, Chapter 6
Relationship: Thorin/Bilbo
Characters: Bilbo Baggins, Fíli, Kíli, Thorin, Dwalin, Balin
Fandom: Hobbit
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Rating: G
Word Count: 2400
Story Summary: In a Middle-Earth where Erebor never fell, a shadow remains in the heart of the Lonely Mountain. Bilbo Baggins finds himself drawn

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[ilovetobefree]

"Usually Thorin disappears into a library and we disappear into the nearest tavern," Dwalin said cheerfully.
:lol

"What's that note at the bottom?" Bilbo asked, forgetting for a moment that he was angry at Thorin and leaning forward to peer at it.
Yay, Bilbo noticed the note. Great. :)

If we emerge from Fornost alive, you will be returning to Erebor," said Thorin.
"No," said Fíli.
"Did that sound like I was making a suggestion?" said Thorin.
Oh, no discusion there it seems...

"Thorin," said Balin, putting a hand on his shoulder. "Considering the situation in Erebor, it might be best...well..."
"He's trying to say the boys might be safer with us than with Prince-Regent Thráin," said Dwalin.
But Bilbo helped them. :)

"I wasn't sneaking," Bilbo said indignantly. "I was just walking. We hobbits are naturally very quiet."
"If only that were true," muttered Thorin.
Nice. :D

Thorin reflected that he was getting tired of never having the last word with this annoying halfling.
Poor Thorin. :D

"Balin," panted Thorin beneath him, struggling to sit up. "Dwalin!"
The two older dwarves weren't with them.
Ouch

"Takes more than a few skeletons to stop us," growled Dwalin.
Good!

"I thought you were quite courageous," said Bilbo.
Kíli and Fíli's faces made it clear that it didn't mean quite the same thing coming from him. "Thank you," Fíli said politely.
*smile*

Loved it! Glad they got through those skeletons. Oh and poor Bilbo, that moment with Balin and Dwalin missing made him pretty upset. And Kíli and Fíli were so cute again. :)
Thank you for sharing. Lookind forward to more. :)

[mithen]

Yay, Bilbo noticed the note. Great. :)

Bilbo can be quite helpful if Thorin will trust him! *nods*

Oh, no discusion there it seems...

Thorin is...not a very discussion-friendly guy!

Balin and Dwalin, I love them so much! Thorin would be so upset to lose them...

More soon, I hope! *crosses fingers and scurries*