Clarity of Vision, Chapter 6

[mithen]

Title: Clarity of Vision, Chapter 6
Relationship: Thorin/Bilbo
Characters: Bilbo Baggins, Fíli, Kíli, Thorin, Dwalin, Balin
Fandom: Hobbit
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Rating: G
Word Count: 2400
Story Summary: In a Middle-Earth where Erebor never fell, a shadow remains in the heart of the Lonely Mountain. Bilbo Baggins finds himself drawn

Comments

[mithen]

*wibbles* It must be so painful for all of them - that they're safer away from their own family is... *wibbles again*

Yeah, that really hurt--that "home" and "safety" don't mean the same place anymore...*sighs for them*

I'm so glad you liked Fili and Kili here, they're so cute sometimes! And yes, yes, it's never really crossed Fili's mind that Uncle Thorin could die, he's always been bigger than life to him...

Hee! Also, I love the little discussion about Deathless - it's strange to see him with Orcrist, but kinda cool to see more Deathless at the same time, you know?

I miss Orcrist so much! *sniffles* You know what I miss more? That I can't call him Thorin Oakenshield, because that never happened! It's killing me!

Aww! *pets them all* They were all very brave, especially Bilbo, really, given that it's entirely out of his range of experience...

It's true, just keeping up is bravery for someone with no experience with these things! I know I'd just lie down and refuse to move ever again...

Annuminas! I really loved writing that city, because it's a lot more peaceful and everyone gets to unwind and relax a little for the first time, and...it made me happy. :)