Comments | mithen: Action and Re-Action 6: Appeal

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Action and Re-Action 6: Appeal

May 06, 2012 22:13

Title: Appeal
Pairing/Characters: Clark Kent/Bruce Wayne, Brainiac, Sam Lane, John Henry Irons, Alfred Pennyworth
Continuity: Comics, set during Action Comics #7 ( scans) and #8 ( scans)
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Metropolis (and Bruce in it) have been miniaturized and kidnapped into space. Superman intends to reach them--even though he ( Read more... )

ch: brainiac, ch: sam lane, ch: clark kent, ch: alfred pennyworth, ch: bruce wayne, series: action and re-action, p: clark/bruce, ch: john henry irons

Comments 39

smilebackwards May 6 2012, 15:15:30 UTC

I love this! And I'm so excited for Bruce to become Batman and team up with Clark :)

mithen May 6 2012, 15:27:02 UTC

I'm having so much fun with this! And Batman's debut is imminent, I promise! :) Glad you're enjoying and thanks for letting me know...

megamom2 May 6 2012, 15:30:32 UTC

mithen May 7 2012, 01:15:39 UTC

Poor Bruce, he can never just have an inspirational moment without getting all meta and self-conscious, lol. But it makes him so much fun to write! :) I'm glad I could make you laugh!

queen0fcups May 6 2012, 15:48:33 UTC

Awww! Bruce being inspired to become Batman in part by Clark is just amazing :-D

I'm tickled that Bruce couldn't help but ogle even when they were all in danger. Though I guess I suppose one could argue that as soon as Superman got there, they weren't in danger anymore.

Also, is that flight sentence punctuation I see? I think so *grins*

mithen May 7 2012, 01:17:51 UTC

Awww! Bruce being inspired to become Batman in part by Clark is just amazing :-D

I love switching them back and forth as inspirations to each other in pre-cape days. :)

Oh man, the ogling! The chapter started off a lot more raunchy, with Bruce trying to estimate about how big certain parts of Superman would be at his current proportions, but it got too ridiculous to keep, lol. (A CITY BLOCK OMG)

Also, is that flight sentence punctuation I see? I think so *grins*

It issss! You inspired me, as I was writing this about when you posted that scene with Heerah. *grin*

queen0fcups May 7 2012, 01:25:28 UTC

Oh my god. The fact that I inspired you, when you inspire me pretty much constantly, made my heart explode with joy.

Meanwhile, *dies laughing at the city block thing*

Maybe save that for an aside? Sometimes silly is important! (I just wrote yet another entry entirely premised on silly, so I would know!) Later, when they're in the relationship mode, have Bruce tease him about his city-block sized endowments :-P

mithen May 7 2012, 01:26:53 UTC

THIS IS A GREAT IDEA. *files away for later* Thank you!

altimeterrise May 6 2012, 16:58:12 UTC

Another lovely installment! And I cracked up at how Bruce kept getting distracted by Clark's skyscraper-sized "attributes." *snickers*

mithen May 7 2012, 01:18:39 UTC

Poor Bruce, no matter how grave the situation was, he couldn't quite stop noticing just how much of Superman there was, lol... I'm glad you enjoyed!

navaan May 6 2012, 17:05:20 UTC

It's wonderful how you've woven Bruce into this new origin story.

Alfred watched him for a long moment. "This is about more than putting in a good team effort, isn't it."

And as always Alfred knows exactly what's going on. :)

mithen May 7 2012, 01:20:31 UTC

I've really enjoyed putting Bruce into this story! I get to jump forward into Justice League with the next chapter, and having all this history between them has made it extra-fun to write. :)

Alfred! Oh, I love him so much, he's so ready to do anything that will get Bruce a nice stable relationship (with a flying super-strong alien). :)

navaan May 7 2012, 20:01:55 UTC

Oh! I'm looking forward to the Justice League part!