Music of the Spheres: Brucie Takes the Cake

[mithen]

Title:  Brucie Takes the Cake
Pairing: Clark/Bruce, Alfred
Notes: "Music of the Spheres" is a series set in the combined universes of "Batman Begins" and "Superman Returns." Other stories and notes on the series here. 
Rating: PG-13
Summary: At a party, Bruce must go to extreme(ly ridiculous) lengths to save innocent lives. 
Word Count: 840
Notes:

Comments

[withinthemoment]

HAHA brilliant... I wonder if Clark will ever let him up long enough to shower of if he'll proceed to give him a tongue bath.

I'm Totally loving the new chapters to this series... keep up the good work.

[mithen]

Hmmmm, I wonder how many places Bruce got frosting while he was flailing around... *evil grin*

I'm really happy to be back to this world a little! I've been trying to write a long story with them and it just didn't come together, but I'm hoping something else does come up and nibble on me... :)

[dizmo]

... Please hold while I giggle for approximately ever. Man, cake diving. The things he does for the Mission. At least he has some help with cleanup! :D

[mithen]

Cake diving! He trained in Cake Diving and Navigation, of course, because you never know. :)

[angelinachaser7]

LMAO! That was a brilliant bit of humor and most delicious, lol.

Cake covered Bruce, Yummy. And Clark questioning Bruce's abilities I still can't believe you managed to disarm that bomb without anyone noticing, all while flailing around in a giant cake. You are absolutely delectable.”

That image only cracks me up, as does Bruce doing a back-flip swan dive into it.

Great story, it totally made my night :D

[mithen]

That image only cracks me up, as does Bruce doing a back-flip swan dive into it.

He really should have done a belly flop! And yet a swan dive is just one of those inherently funny things, I think... :)

Hee! I'm glad I made your night a bit and thank you for the comment!

[ilovetobefree]

Alfred Pennyworth opens the morning paper and rubs his mouth as if trying to keep a smile from breaking his stoic facade.Blithering Brucie’s Latest Blunder cries the society page.
“Alfred trying to keep a smile” - reading this I was like - WOW it must have been something special when it almost made Alfred smile. :)

Bruce strolled up the stairs to Clark and kissed him on the cheek. “Do you think perhaps we should be going?” Clark asked, stifling a yawn. He knew Bruce could read Shouldn’t Gordon evacuate? in his eyes.

“Now, now, love,” Bruce cooed, leaning on the mezzanine railing and examining the crowd below. “There’s no need to rush! I’m having a lovely evening.” Behind his smile, Clark could see visions of terror, stampedes--perhaps a feint right into Red Claw’s plans, for that matter. “Just a little more time.”
I loved this part! I loved how Clark could see Bruce’s feelings (those ones hidden behind his smile) and how much they loved, trusted and supported each other.

--He grabbed Bruce’s hand. “”The cake,” he hissed.
O-ow

His

[mithen]

I loved how Clark could see Bruce’s feelings (those ones hidden behind his smile) and how much they loved, trusted and supported each other.

That's part of what's fun about writing these two in an established relationship! They're so quick to understand each other and act together, it's a wonderful thing...

Hee, I'm glad you liked those lines! I can't imagine that Clark could resist a frosting-covered Bruce, lol... :) And it was fun to open and close with a smiling Alfred, it really made my mood happy to write it!

[gogglehead84]

Yummy! Bruce sounds tasty tonight ;).

[mithen]

Bruce is tasty every night, of course! But tonight he's sweeter than usual, lol...