The Man Who Falls (10/10)

Apr 15, 2011 00:06

Title: The Man Who Falls (10/10)

Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Alfred Pennyworth, Jim Gordon, Lucius Fox
Rating: PG-13
Warnings:  None needed
Continuity: The Dark Knight/Superman Returns crossover; a continuation of Leap of Faith.
Word Count:  3200Summary:  Clark Kent arrives in Gotham after the events of The Dark Knight and adds up the facts ( Read more... )

series: leap of faith, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce, ch: lucius fox, ch: jim gordon, ch: alfred pennyworth

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zolac_no_miko April 14 2011, 16:26:27 UTC
Okay let's see if I can squeeze in a whole comment before my roommate shows up and whisks me off to California.

*FLAILFLAILFLAILFLAILFLAIL*

"You may remember I have always insisted that there was no evidence whatsoever connecting Batman to those crimes. It was dark and events unfolded very quickly. I wouldn't feel comfortable saying exactly what happened." - Oh, Jim Gordon~. ♥ Master of the vague, neutral statement~!

"Clark Kent, Metropolis Daily Planet. I was wondering, sir...are your children all right?"

Jim blinked, then said, "They're doing well, thank you for asking." Kent broke into a smile so radiant that Jim found himself smiling back. - CLARK, YOU GIGANTIC SWEETHEART!! ♥ ♥

I love love LOVE Brucie calling up Lucius and blathering on over speakerphone like a moron, and his double entendres when it came to Harley, and ohmigod there was so much giggling!

And then him and Alfred and Clark in the bedroom, Bruce being IMPOSSIBLY ANNOYING as a patient (I'VE BEEN JUST SITTING HER DOING NOTHING FOR THIRTEEN AND A HALF HOURS, HOW WILL I LIVE?!) and also being adorable and flirty. And Kryptonian, eee! ^_^

And: "I don't sulk," stated Bruce. "I express moderated disapproval."

He sulks, Alfred mouthed at Clark, and exited with a wink. - I love this! As much as I adore comics!Alfred and all of his dignified, straight-faced, wry, dry humor, Caine is so much fun with his cheekiness and snark.

AND THE BATSIGNAL! :DDDDDDDDD

AND THAT'S ALL THE TIME I HAVE, ASDFJKL;GHFDS THIS WAS AWESOME. *runs off*

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mithen April 15 2011, 00:39:20 UTC
Ooooh, enjoy your whisking to California! :)

CLARK, YOU GIGANTIC SWEETHEART!! ♥ ♥

I love Clark being all polite at press conferences! (I also love him really hounding someone when they deserve it, lol!)

I love love LOVE Brucie calling up Lucius and blathering on over speakerphone like a moron, and his double entendres when it came to Harley, and ohmigod there was so much giggling!

That was so much fun to write! My beta and I just had fun throwing out crazy lines for an hour and then I picked the best. :)

As much as I adore comics!Alfred and all of his dignified, straight-faced, wry, dry humor, Caine is so much fun with his cheekiness and snark.

He's super-fun to write, but I always have to go back and add more cheek, lol!

I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for grabbing the time to tell me so on a tight schedule! :)

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