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mithen

Fic: Till Death Do Us Part (Conclusion)

Feb 17, 2009 10:36

Title: Till Death Do Us Part
Characters/Pairings: Kal/Bruce, Lex Luthor, Lara, Jor-El, Alfred
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Nightwing and Flamebird discover Lex Luthor's evil plan and rush to stop him if possible. A continuation of the From This Day Forward series.
Word count: 2700
Note: This is technically the conclusion of the series (at least for now ( Read more... )

ch: lara, ch: jor-el, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce, ch: lex luthor, ch: alfred pennyworth

Comments 59

bradygirl_12 February 17 2009, 02:17:50 UTC

Lots of great excitement! :)

LOL at the part of the adventure that enthralled the Kryptonians most! I sense a cultural revolution coming! ;)

Hmm, am I reading this right? Does Jor-El know/suspect? Kal said he thanked Bruce, delicate vapors and all! :)

A magic super-powered baby? Nah, no trouble a'tall! Get Jonathan and Martha to help raise him/her. They raised a super-baby, after all. ;)

bradygirl_12 February 17 2009, 02:25:09 UTC

Jonathan and Martha didn't in this world. It's one of the sad realities of this universe. By the way I'm pretty sure Jor-El and Lara know.

Angeloz

bradygirl_12 February 17 2009, 02:30:29 UTC

Oh, I know! Just a generalization! ;)

elenorasweet February 17 2009, 02:25:15 UTC

Jonathan, Martha, Jor-El, Lara and Alfred? Jesus, there's a parenting machine and a half.

8D I like it!

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anonymous February 17 2009, 02:20:48 UTC

You really scared me with what happened to Nightwing. Also can I vote for more stories in this universe? I'd really love it. One little thing I noticed - I think you mean "wreak havoc". I believe. I just want to add I love your stories. I really love this one in particular. Even if I don't go into details. I'm sure others will mention them better than I would.

Angeloz

mithen February 17 2009, 02:50:46 UTC

Oh, thanks for the terminology catch, that's one I always manage to get wrong, it seems! *fixes* I'm going to be thinking about this world a lot, we'll see if it turns into other stories. The epilogue is set in the future, so that gives me a lot of time/space to play with. :)

Glad you liked it!

northern_star February 17 2009, 02:21:31 UTC

Excellent ending! Loved to see them defeating Lex - awesome, awesome confrontation! :D

And awwww! poor Bruce got hurt. *hugs him* I bet it probably annoys him that Nightwing and Flamebird's kiss is being broadcast all over the news, huh? ;) I think it's adorable!

Totally made me smile to have this to read this evening. :) Thanks for sharing - and I'll certainly be looking forward to that epilogue. hehehe! :D

mithen February 17 2009, 02:53:36 UTC

I love your icon! *squees*

And awwww! poor Bruce got hurt. *hugs him* I bet it probably annoys him that Nightwing and Flamebird's kiss is being broadcast all over the news, huh? ;) I think it's adorable!

I would think he'd be pretty torn--he'd like to see Kryptonian society open up more, but...preferably without broadcasting him making out with his husband, lol. And I think Lara will keep replaying it a lot just to annoy him...

I had way too much fun writing the little epilogue. :) Thanks for giving me the push I needed to buckle in and write it!

northern_star February 17 2009, 17:24:51 UTC

Feel free to snag the icon if you like it. (contrary to what it says on my userpics listing, it's something I made about a year ago... :cough:)

I so love Lara in this, she's sweet and fun (a little bit clueless, no doubt, but that's okay - she makes up for it by being open to new things!)

Glad you had fun with the epilogue! :D And hey, trust me, I'll do just about anything to get you to write more fic! ;)

elenorasweet February 17 2009, 02:23:41 UTC

All of those arguments, at the end, sound to me like the reasonings of a man who's made up his mind to do the complete opposite of reason.

Which means babies!!

*cough* Also, the line about keeping the dogs in line was perfect.

I'm so dead pleased with Jor-El and Lara, and with the news coverage of the Kiss That Rocked Krypton, and poor Brucie's case of the vapours- lol! ^___^ You do so rock in this series. I hope there'll someday be more, after the epilogue to this story!

mithen February 17 2009, 02:56:13 UTC

All of those arguments, at the end, sound to me like the reasonings of a man who's made up his mind to do the complete opposite of reason.

Which means babies!!

Hee! I'm glad that came across--Bruce is already mentally designing a crib that might hold a super-baby, I suspect. He enjoys a good tactical challenge...

The epilogue is set years in the future, but that leaves me a lot of space in the middle if I want to write about Kal and Bruce dealing with having a super-toddler who wants to help out with fighting crime. :) Poor Bruce...

I'm so glad you've been liking it!

elenorasweet February 17 2009, 03:36:52 UTC

*thinks back to the Saga of the Supersons* Oh god, the super-teen phase...!

ex_felonazc February 17 2009, 02:34:53 UTC

N'awww, boys. ♥

That was perfect! And I love how all of Krypton is obsessed with their kiss. I bet Kal wasn't even thinking about the robot camera when he saw Bruce injured on the ground.

mithen February 17 2009, 02:59:25 UTC

I bet Kal wasn't even thinking about the robot camera when he saw Bruce injured on the ground.

I'm pretty sure if he'd remembered it was there he would have been a lot cooler, if only to save Bruce the embarrassment later. *grin*

For some reason I'm having a lot of fun imagining Krypton treating them like major celebrities. It should be possible on Earth in canon, and yet people seem so blase about such things there most of the time... "Another day, another giant robot attack Superman saves us from." :D