OHMYGOD!!! :Dclockworks11November 27 2010, 04:26:03 UTC
*_* I need more of this so freaking bad, HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME ON THAT HOOK?! OH MY GOD!!! I am freaking out, you have no idea! (Okay, by now, you probably think I'm some ten year old that has no life for posting the most weirdest comments, BUT I'M NOT A TEN YEAR OLD, I'M JUST WEIRD!) But, Oh. My. God. OKAY, I'LL START FROM THE TOP! One; In you author's note, you said you almost gave up on this story?! D: I respect your almost decision, but you would have broken my little Panic! at the Opera heart! D: Yea, I don't check up on livejournal all the time since I use buzznet, BUT OHMYGOD, THIS IS ONE OF MY ALL TIME FAVORITE PANIC! FANFICS EVER! Seriously, I'm not lying! I know you're not even done yet, but you have no idea how much joy this story brings me! I know that makes me look weird, BUT OH WELL! This story seriously brings me joy, and I'd be rreeaallyy sad if you didn't continue it! Especially with a cliff hanger like IN THIS CHAPTER! But really, I hope you do continue! No pressure though, I respect/understand ANY of your decisions! [: MOVING ON! :D Okay, this chapter has to be my FAVORITE by far! I just love how you open it! :D Now I'm curious what the red stuff was that Ryan was drinking! It's probably cough syrup... Damn cough syrup... Just kidding, I hated drinking that DISGUSTING STUFF! Okay, back to the point! xD I love how you describe Brendon in this chapter. I can't really explain what it is, and that's what I like! It's mysterious! I really don't know how to classify Brendon. Is he really nice? Does he like to take control? A little of both? I don't know, and not knowing drives me crazy, and I FREAKING LOVE IT! :D Next, I seriously love how it's like Brendon can read Ryan's mind. At first I was thinking, "Holy shit, Brendon is sexy, AND HE CAN READ RYAN'S MIND, FOR TRUE?!" and then as I read the ending of this chapter I'm assuming here that Brendon is JUST THAT MUCH OF A ([{sexy}]) creeper, that he just KNOWS what Ryan is thinking. And either way, that makes me freakishly happy! [x AND THEN! I love the description of the place very much so! When he saw the stamp that was described as, "skull infused with a bat’s skeleton" I sorta pictured it as the "Avenged Sevenfold" logo for a few seconds there! xD MADE ME SMILE! :D Though I know what you're REALLY aiming at, no worries! :D And I love the bottle with mysterious "red" ;D ink. xD So what REALLY just over the top sold this chapter to me? As if the entire thing building up to the end wasn't orgasmic ENOUGH, you just had to make the ending THE BIGGEST orgasmic part EVER!!! Not to sound like a creeper myself, but oh. my. God. When Ryan stumbled into Brendon's creeper room, I was just in love with your own description of it. I love how you reinvented the Phantom's creeper stalker ways in this fanfic! Like I've said before, you're sticking to the original plot, while adding your own personal bitter-sweet flavor that literally makes me WANT MORE!!! That ending, like... HOW COULD YOU?! It's sooo goood! I can't wait until you update again, because you will literally make me the happiest girl ALIVE!!! :D >_< I love this story too much! :D
Re: OHMYGOD!!! :DmitchiemarieNovember 30 2010, 03:58:01 UTC
I'm weird t 8DDDDDDD I LOVE THIS COMMENT~ <333 IT'S SO LONG AND AKJLFSFSLFKS FULL OF AWESOMENESS xDD <3 xDDD /BRENDON IS A SEXYFUCKINGCREEPER. <333 xDD a7x? xD I've seen it but I was going for the bartskull xDD i love both tho~ 8'D o.o red ink was probably blood ~ ew xD YAY! I WAS AFRAID IT WASN'T ORGASMIC ENOUGH ;D I love the original plot (except for the end -.- OHGOSHADLKFSDIHATETHEEND) so I kept it the same yet with a Michelle tone xD /ALSO BTW I CHANGED THE ENDING LIKE 88 PERCENT xDDD ^^ my bittersweet tone is apparent o.o <3333 ILOVEYOUTOO :D
Re: OHMYGOD!!! :Dclockworks11November 30 2010, 23:49:20 UTC
YESYESYESYES!!! >:D I AM SO FREAKING EXCITED FOR THE ENDING OF YOUR STORY, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW!!! I don't want this story to end, BUT OHMYGOD, YES! I JUST KNOW IT'S GONNA BE THE BEST THING SINCE JESUS!!! >:D
Re: OHMYGOD!!! :DmitchiemarieDecember 3 2010, 02:55:24 UTC
xDDD WELL I WOULDN'T GO THAT FAR!!!!! ACTUALLY IDK o.o I'M NOT SURE HOW THE END WILL TURN OUT D: I MEANT I KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN AND SHI~ BUT AKDNMGSD YEAH xDDD THANKS THOUGH BBY 8D
OKAY, I'LL START FROM THE TOP!
One; In you author's note, you said you almost gave up on this story?! D: I respect your almost decision, but you would have broken my little Panic! at the Opera heart! D: Yea, I don't check up on livejournal all the time since I use buzznet, BUT OHMYGOD, THIS IS ONE OF MY ALL TIME FAVORITE PANIC! FANFICS EVER! Seriously, I'm not lying! I know you're not even done yet, but you have no idea how much joy this story brings me! I know that makes me look weird, BUT OH WELL! This story seriously brings me joy, and I'd be rreeaallyy sad if you didn't continue it! Especially with a cliff hanger like IN THIS CHAPTER! But really, I hope you do continue! No pressure though, I respect/understand ANY of your decisions! [:
MOVING ON! :D
Okay, this chapter has to be my FAVORITE by far! I just love how you open it! :D Now I'm curious what the red stuff was that Ryan was drinking! It's probably cough syrup... Damn cough syrup... Just kidding, I hated drinking that DISGUSTING STUFF! Okay, back to the point! xD I love how you describe Brendon in this chapter. I can't really explain what it is, and that's what I like! It's mysterious! I really don't know how to classify Brendon. Is he really nice? Does he like to take control? A little of both? I don't know, and not knowing drives me crazy, and I FREAKING LOVE IT! :D
Next, I seriously love how it's like Brendon can read Ryan's mind. At first I was thinking, "Holy shit, Brendon is sexy, AND HE CAN READ RYAN'S MIND, FOR TRUE?!" and then as I read the ending of this chapter I'm assuming here that Brendon is JUST THAT MUCH OF A ([{sexy}]) creeper, that he just KNOWS what Ryan is thinking. And either way, that makes me freakishly happy! [x
AND THEN! I love the description of the place very much so! When he saw the stamp that was described as, "skull infused with a bat’s skeleton" I sorta pictured it as the "Avenged Sevenfold" logo for a few seconds there! xD MADE ME SMILE! :D Though I know what you're REALLY aiming at, no worries! :D And I love the bottle with mysterious "red" ;D ink. xD
So what REALLY just over the top sold this chapter to me? As if the entire thing building up to the end wasn't orgasmic ENOUGH, you just had to make the ending THE BIGGEST orgasmic part EVER!!! Not to sound like a creeper myself, but oh. my. God. When Ryan stumbled into Brendon's creeper room, I was just in love with your own description of it. I love how you reinvented the Phantom's creeper stalker ways in this fanfic! Like I've said before, you're sticking to the original plot, while adding your own personal bitter-sweet flavor that literally makes me WANT MORE!!! That ending, like... HOW COULD YOU?! It's sooo goood! I can't wait until you update again, because you will literally make me the happiest girl ALIVE!!! :D >_< I love this story too much! :D
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ILYBB!
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8DDDDDDD
I LOVE THIS COMMENT~
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IT'S SO LONG AND AKJLFSFSLFKS FULL OF AWESOMENESS
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/BRENDON IS A SEXYFUCKINGCREEPER.
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a7x? xD
I've seen it but I was going for the bartskull xDD
i love both tho~ 8'D
o.o red ink was probably blood ~ ew
xD
YAY!
I WAS AFRAID IT WASN'T ORGASMIC ENOUGH ;D
I love the original plot (except for the end -.- OHGOSHADLKFSDIHATETHEEND) so I kept it the same yet with a Michelle tone xD
/ALSO BTW I CHANGED THE ENDING LIKE 88 PERCENT
xDDD
^^ my bittersweet tone is apparent o.o
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ILOVEYOUTOO :D
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WELL I WOULDN'T GO THAT FAR!!!!!
ACTUALLY IDK o.o
I'M NOT SURE HOW THE END WILL TURN OUT D:
I MEANT I KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN AND SHI~
BUT
AKDNMGSD
YEAH
xDDD
THANKS THOUGH BBY 8D
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I LOVE YOU!!
YOUR FAITH IN ME IS ASTOUNDING ^^
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