Naruto, "Enough," Kakashi/Iruka, NC-17

May 08, 2006 04:38

My girl celipa23 has been ever so patient with me, waiting for me to finish fic of Kakashi and Iruka, so this is for her, born from a bunny I honestly no longer remember. She said she liked it when Kakashi gave Iruka head, I remember that much, so that's what we've got ( Read more... )

iruka, naruto, fanfiction, nc-17, kakashi

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elict May 8 2006, 08:56:18 UTC
aah now it's a good day again. smut from mistress quickly... what more can you wish for in the beginning fo the week? ^^

i've been looking, but maybe i'm too lazy or just blind, because i can't find your first-time fics with kakashi and iruka. do you have any names to give me to amke the search easier, and i'll go look again on your homepage.

thanks! ^^

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mistr3ssquickly May 8 2006, 17:59:56 UTC
I'll tell ya, it felt damned good to write these two again. I'm really glad you like them as well! ^_^

The reason you can't find the first-timer fic of these two, from me at any rate, is that I haven't written it. First-times are always difficult for me, because I was raised believing that sex should be saved until marriage. Often, I have to work with a pairing quite a bit before I can comfortably decide how they would have been intimate together, the first time.

Prudish attitude from a lemon-writer, what a combination.

I'm glad you liked the story, dear. Thank you for reading me!

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ceasefire May 8 2006, 09:01:29 UTC
Coz you told me to comment even if I dunno the fandom coz you like my comments... ^^;

"Ngh, yes, come for me," Iruka whispered, hips rocking in tiny thrusts, the head of his cock bumping the back of Kakashi's throat. "Yes, Kakashi, yes, please, mmm ..."

ONCE AGAIN YOU KILL MY INNER VOYEUR, you bad, bad woman. XD Mmm, beautiful, hot sex between two sexy men who I don't know but oh well ^^; and heheh, bettert watch that limp, the students will get curious XD

*snuggles you* Wonderful job, hon. Sorry I can't say more; I don't know these two well enough to rave on like I do with Jean and Roy.

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mistr3ssquickly May 8 2006, 18:02:31 UTC
Hahaha, you're sweet hon, did you know that? Seriously. Thank you for letting me know that you've read this, I really appreciate it. And really, would it be *that* much of a stretch to adapt this fic to be Roy and Jean?

I'm beginning to think that your inner voyeur and my inner voyeur are related to one another, I really am. It's good times, watching men be dirty together, ne?

*snugs* I shall write you some hot Jean/Roy as thanks for such a lovely comment, hon. Thank you for reading this story, it means the world to me!

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ceasefire May 9 2006, 11:28:47 UTC
^_^ Hey, you're too nice not to read for, you always write so well and are so happy when people comment. Ehn, probably now but you wrote it for Naruto and you should keep it like that...

Haha, ours inner voyeurs should get married and have voyeurbunnies XD And it IS! Especially when it's a certain Colonel and his blond Second Lieutenant, but that's my bias :P

Haha, you don't have to do that if you don't want ^_^;; I like commenting on your stuff. No worries, darling. *smooch*

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mistr3ssquickly May 9 2006, 13:11:22 UTC
I'm working on the ULTIMATE Jean/Roy voyeurbunny ... I'd say it's hot, but it's so sadly pathetic and on CRACK that "hot" really just isn't the proper term.

Damn I love your OTP. And the thing I've noticed is that none of my couples are *truly* similar ... Kakashi and Iruka have a level of hurt/comfort snark that isn't anything like Jean and Roy's loving banter and desperate trust, and aside from being younger pairings, my Russel/Ed is different as well, as is my Al/Danny. So I've got a pairing for whatever mood I happen to fall into and it's *good* to know that I won't have to stretch characters to get what I want. I just have to choose the proper pair.

Enough out of me. It still makes me squee that you commented on this. Thank you so much, sweetie! ♥

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rachecho May 8 2006, 09:01:40 UTC
i haven't read any really good kakairu. but wow, this was really good. i don't like it when people demean iruka, make him into this bottom that isn't "iruka". but you kept him as himself, and still make the pr0n really hot ^^

::fans self:: geez, it got really hot in here ^^;;

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mistr3ssquickly May 8 2006, 18:04:55 UTC
Aw, I'm glad you liked this, hon! This pairing is so very much fun to work with, both with a plot and without.

Iruka's a hell of a man. I mean, he's sensitive enough to work with children, yet enough of a hardass to be a good disciplinarian, and on top of that, he's a ninja who managed to pass the chuunin exam, and he's served on missions before. In my book, that makes him utterly desireable not one to be bitched down in bed unless he *wants* to be bitched down in bed.

/rant

I'm glad you liked the fic! Thank you for reading me! *^_^*

PS
What seal is Sasuke *actually* forming in your icon?

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amoralambiguity May 8 2006, 09:09:23 UTC
That was really really hott.

Just the thing i need before bed. *_* Going to have really nice dreams now.

I would love to see a plot put to this. Now it's just me I am sure, but I could see a really good Jealous!Kakashi plot. Not like how most people do Jealous!Kakashi, not to the violent or abusively possesive, but a more gentle form. I like Protective, gently not interfering or hindering possessiveness. It's hard to explain. But I hope that got the point across.

Putting this in memories.

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mistr3ssquickly May 8 2006, 18:06:56 UTC
Oooh you're *close* on the plot, but not quite on it. I don't like jealousy, it's something I struggle with all the time, so I try not to write it too often (unless the muses are being utterly *demanding*). But seriously, you've absolutely *nailed* part of what comes in later chapters.

Guess this means I really *do* have to continue now, eh? ^_~ I'm so glad you liked the story. Thank you for reading me!

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shake_it_buddy May 8 2006, 12:43:28 UTC
Kakashi's right, it's never enough, I can't get enough of your fics! *gets beat up for being such a dork* xD;;

The way you write them is just.. "Whoa! *nosebleeds*" ^^

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mistr3ssquickly May 8 2006, 18:08:13 UTC
Haha aw, you're so sweet! I'm really glad you like my writing, dear, and I will do my very best to make more stories happen with fewer than, what three weeks in between? Slacker, I am.

*offers tissues* Thank you for reading me!

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