Let's just call this the "Miles Edgeworth" chapter, shall we? 'Cause that's what it turned into. The rest of the stuff-y'know, the stuff that focuses on Apollo and Klavier, the guys supposedly starring in this arc?-yeah, it got moved into chapter 14. 'Cause Miles Edgeworth, he don't share his chapter with nobody. Well. Maybe. XD
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You watch, I'll just shove all that into my novel and then people'll have to take the time to read it 'cause it's not fanfiction, 'cept they won't. *emo*
I had such fun adding Edgeworth into this mess. He's the only one who isn't really emotionally attached, so I got to use him as my logic stick. Which was nice, with all these emotional men running around! *laughs* I'm glad you enjoyed him too, hon!
Oh man, I agree that it's horrid for everyone to be talking about Apollo over Apollo's head. And because it seems to piss you off so bad, I've incorporated it quite a bit into Jovial's story. Not because I want to piss you off, but because it seems to be working ... and oh man, Jovial hates it. So much. *sighs*
Thank you so much for your enthusiasm and thoughtful feedback, dear. You have inspired a good deal of this arc, and you have no idea how much of my novel. You are just amazing. *hugs*
~m
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