Kyo Kara Maoh, "In Preparation For, Part III," Wolfram/OC, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

This is my favorite chapter. I wrote most of it in one sitting and while half-asleep, and it has some very heavily veiled truths that I have learned in my own life. If you want to know what those truths are, you'll need to get to know me better. ^_o

Anywho, I hope you like this chapter as much as I do. ♥

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Comments

[piogge]

Poor, Poor Wolfram. D; Yuuri deserves to be kicked in the face for doing that to him. He needs hugs (Wolfram). Hee~

Wonderful fic so far, I really can't wait till the next part, for sure~

ALSO, first comment, whoo!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Poor ol' Wolfram, he does need a hug. Unfortunately, I think one would have to be suicidal to hug him, right now. XD

I'm so glad you liked this, dear! Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[mistr3ssquickly]

Mmm, not dumb at all, and by all means, RAMBLE AT ME. Happy times in my paaants

[faerie_speak]

It's a very interesting take on these characters so far! I quite like it. But I do have to say, I'm not sure if Wolfram would have leverage with the whole "threat" to expose Allen as gay since in this world, two men can be engaged and marry and it's seen as normal. Cheri even fawns over Wolfram, claiming how the young men will adore his good looks in the fourth episode I think.

But! I did like the implication of Allen getting in trouble for eye-humping Wolfram, that would be a real problem for Allen. ^^

[mistr3ssquickly]

Mmm. I should've made it clearer (wanted to last night, but couldn't figure out to do it) that it's not Sgt. Allen's sexual orientation that Wolfram's using as a threat, it's the fact that he's (supposedly) got evidence of fraternization that he's threatening to use against him. That's where the threat at the end comes from, Sgt. Allen's position in the elite guard threatened by the fact that he just screwed his commanding officer into the rug.

Lucky bastard. *cough*

I'm glad you like the story so far, still. Thanks for reading, sweetie! ♥

~m

[smexy_cakes]

Love your story! I hope it gets better between the two. I hope Yuuri suffers >_<

Yuuri needs to be kill, hurt, disown, and many other things for hurting Wolf ;_;. But why did Wolf sink to Yuuris level. He is better then that >_

[mistr3ssquickly]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you like it so far. Things ... hmm. I'll say that things get better, but it's very much a matter of opinion, whether or not things actually DO get better. You'll have to wait and see. XD

As for Wolfram sinking to Yuuri's level, yeah, he kinda did. But he did it because he thought it would help make things better, not because he wanted to get back at Yuuri. Not entirely. Poor muse. ;_;

Thanks for reading, dear!

~m

[pollinia]

Oh, honey. I adore this. So much. I like Wolfram sort of cruel and manipulative like this because he IS. And poor, sweet Sergeant Allen. ;_;

You have some lines in here that are just incredible. These two in particular:

even in his unnaturally long lifetime.

and

standing in the courtyard like loyal dogs, patiently awaiting their master's return.

I'm stunned by this, hon. You've done amazing things with it. :)

[mistr3ssquickly]

*cuddles* I'm really glad you liked this, hon! I may not like Wolfram very much (like him better than I like Yuuri, at least), but I do feel bad for him. And then there's Sgt. Allen ... John wants to adopt him and feed him soup, get him out of fandom and into what he calls "the household."

Silly muses. XD

Thank you for inspiring this arc, hon. It's been such fun! *smooch*

~m

[pollinia]

...Sgt. Allen definitely needs to join the household! I'd give The Boy's left testicle to see Allen's interarctions with Taylor. ;)

[mistr3ssquickly]

I somehow don't think giving The Boy's testicles would be much of a sacrifice for you. XD However, I could crank out some crack of Taylor and Allen. That'd be ... like super-hilarious, IMO. ♥

~m