Samurai Seven, "Sense," Kanbei/Shichiroji, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

Oh how I have missed writing S7!

Here we have a short bit of a fic, written for laurazel whose simply gorgeous drawing makes me weak at the knees, and for dragonwrangler who commissioned this beautiful piece, and is just, in general, indescribably awesome.

I hope both of you like it! ♥

~m

Note: If you can't see the drawing, it's because you're not signed in to y!

Comments

[dragonwrangler]

Oh, I love it! It fits the piece perfectly- thank you! And you really got my senses going reading this- the heat and the feel of it all. And I especially love those last few line- that's how I image them being! *hugs for the fic*

[mistr3ssquickly]

*snuggles like crazy* I'm so glad you liked it, hon. You're such a sweetie.

The drawing is so sensual ... it just begged for a fic focused on feel, I thought. Good to know you thought so, too!

Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[pockygirl]

this was hot with an a-w-t, dear. i declare it to b goodfic.
adoring the run-on sentences.
~pocky-lizzard

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahah, I'm glad you liked it, hon. Run on sentences are good for stream-of-consciousness, don't you know? I'm sure my English teacher would cry if he saw them (over the construction or the content ... well that's up in the air at present ^_~).

Thanks for reading!

~m

[enigmaroolz]

Hell, to some he'd watched breathe there last, the ten years he'd spent away from his lover-his commander-was a lifetime.

"there" should be "their"

--deep, satisfied sigh-- Mmmmmm. You know, when I very first saw this drawing of Zel's, I was immediately taken with it. I found it every bit as erotic as her more graphic portrayals of their love-making. I am no less than thrilled that you chose to write about it. --kissing you deeply-- Thank you, Mo!

[mistr3ssquickly]

You know, I don't archive my fic posts 'til you've read them because you always catch my dumbass mistakes. Do you have any idea just how much I rant at people for making that very same mistake? *growls*

I'm glad you liked the fic, hon, and that it seemed to go well with Zel's art. Her stuff just smacks of life so much, I can't help but write it! Thank you so much for reading, Da! ♥

~m(o)

[sailormac]

*drool* This was SO worth the risk of reading pr0n at work. The *details* in this are what make it so very hot, from the sound of shells clinking to the sensation of a trimmed beard rubbing against skin. You *feel* this fic, that's for sure, and that's the essence of what erotic material should be.

[mistr3ssquickly]

*grins* I'm so glad you liked this, dear (and that you risked reading it at work, no less!). I had Zel's art up in a window beside my document while I was writing it, and the detail of her work just *begged* to be in the story. Good to know it fit in well!

Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[chrstphrl]

Beautiful as always. Super hot and deliciously warm, it's sweet without being sappy and tender without being girly. Lovely, lovely.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Thank you, hon. I'm glad you liked it! My inner feminist wants to know "what's wrong with being girly," but with Shichiroji and Kanbei, a whole lot is wrong with girly. ^_~

Thanks for reading!

~m

[chrstphrl]

I totally meant no disrespect to girly-ness. You know how it bugs me to see guys in yaoi feminized (is that even a word). You don't do it but there are a ton who do.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Haha, I knew that babe, no worries. The only girliness you'll ever get from me will be if Akil manages to get Al into stockings again, and Danny insists that THAT'S never going to happen again. ^_~

And I'm in agreement ... yaoi that's just chicks with boybits (or god forbid, mpreg) needs to be erased wholly from the earth. Except in one case, but we'll leave it at that. ^_~

~m