antistar

[mistersleepless]

I've smoked a thousand cigarettes since the sun went down and the world's gotten as quiet as death

Comments

[gunn]

The enormity- the quiet after the struggle- very nice.

[madolan]

Personal revolution in the face of cultural apocalypse!

...I just wish it sounded more like fiction and less like reality. Well done-- I'm horribly uncomfortable.

[shaunathan]

Culture as a means of control. Very Althusser-ic. I like it :)

[nerd_king]

This story is like a literal rorshach pattern. You throw us a few snippets of ideas and thoughts and observations - and out of the confusion we create our own story.

If you intended to do that - very cool.

[aandwrootb33r]

hmm, impressionist writing?
i always find it difficult to write like that, always too much or too little and never just enough.

[poorheather]

Genius.

Gradually reducing descriptive terms in order to make us feel our own death rattle. I love it.