[Drabble] There I Was (Yoochun's POV)

May 17, 2010 22:39

Title: Saying “I Love You” is Hard to Do
Author: missvue09
Pairing: Yoosu (Yoochun's POV)
Length: one-shot (508 words)
Genre: fluff, humor
Rating: G
Summary: It’s their 100th day anniversary and Yoochun is finally going to tell Junsu that he loves him. Will Su say, “I love you” back?

A/N: Dedicated to drtrypanophobic for suggesting that I practice my writing by writing different genres of one-shots.


There I Was

There I was, sitting next to my boyfriend, Junsu, on a sandy beach in comfortable silence, on our 100th day anniversary, watching the sun set in the horizon. Su sat with his knees up to his chest and his arms crossed on top of them. Resting his head on his arms, he looked very calm and relaxed, which is more than what I could say for myself. I was a total nervous wreck.

There I was, mustering up the courage to tell Su that I love him for the first time since we got together 100 days ago. I was so nervous that my palms were sweating. I didn’t even know that was possible! Though the weather was cool, I couldn’t keep the temperature of my head, particularly my cheeks and ears, from rising as each minute went by. My heart was beating rapidly, as if I had just completed a triathlon. There were so many butterflies in my stomach that I almost felt like I needed to puke in order to get rid of them. Not exactly the kind of feeling one would want to have before one says, “I love you” to one’s significant other.

There I was, slyly wiping the sweat off my palms on my cargo shorts only to repeat this process again a minute later. I brought up my hand to my cheeks and press them against each other in an attempt to cool my cheeks, but that was a complete fail. I reasoned that my ears couldn’t be cooled down either. There was not much I could do to my internal organs (heart and stomach) without drawing attention to myself from Su, so I gave up trying to calm my nerves down.

There I was, getting up to stand on my feet and extending my left arm out to help Su to his. I intertwined our hands and walk a few steps towards the freezing waves washing up on the shore of the beach. I stop and turn to face my beautiful Su, who gives me a soft smile as we look into each other’s eyes lovingly. I caress his cheek with my right hand and lean in, closing the gap between us, until our lips touched for a light kiss. After the kiss, I rested my forehead upon Su’s, our eyes still closed, and my hand still on his cheek when I finally whispered those three words.

“I love you, Su.”

There I was, completely proud of myself for being the first one to say, “I love you” in our relationship-not that this was a race or anything. I return to my standing position in order to see Su’s reaction. There was a tint of pink on his cheeks as he smiled and looked down shyly. I reached for his hands and brought both of them up for a kiss each.

“Don’t you have something you would like to say to me?” I asked him.

He smiled up at me and said…

"Arigatou!"
(translation: “Thank you!”)


Su's POV

Warning: not as good/funny as this part, kind of boring since some things are repeated from the this part as well.

A/N: Wow! This was not what I had planned to write at all! I had a totally different idea originally. I was just writing along when I VAGUELY recalled a clip I saw on youtube, where someone (the interviewer, perhaps?) asked Junsu what he will say to a girl when she confesses to him and his answer was “Thank you! I've been waiting!”, and so I decided to end it the way I did. Here's the part of the clip at 2:50 (video is not mine).

Oh, and when I get nervous before a giving presentation, for some reason, my cheeks get REALLY warm. I just thought I add that in case some of you are skeptical about the rise in temperature in the cheeks when one gets nervous. Thanks for reading! I hope you've enjoyed it as much as I did!

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Fic List

video, pairing: yoosu, drabble, *ff series: saying ily is hard to do, junsu

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