as close as this; castle fic
as close as this | castle; castle/beckett | 1495 words | pg | birthday fic for shimmeryshine
( There are these small moments with him where she breathes in and what she feels is completely weightless; what she feels is happiness. )
( There are these small moments with him where she breathes in and what she feels is completely weightless; what she feels is happiness. )
First I want to say the tone in which you wrote this is ... I think comforting? I'm not fully sure how to word it but how you use words, it just sort of feels light and right - no extra words in the way, just what it should be. Second, I love that it's not perfect because as awesome as they are and as much as they seem like they're already together they're not. That dynamic is bound to change so I love that. I love that she's the most open when she's naked. It's unexpected yet it feels like it would be specific to her.
(On another note I am halfway through a fic where she's in the bath and he's on the floor. I didn't steal. I always feel like I need to point that out cause plagiarism sucks lol.)
Running out of time so god bless Heather on her birthday. :) And while I love smut fics I think ones like these are understated. I love seeing this side especially when someone writes as beautifully as you do.
(I apologize for the lack of ... Whatever .... This review is missing. Without shower and coffee - and sometimes with - I'm useless.)
Gorgeous, gorgeous. If I haven't said anything else in here know I mean that. (You deserve better than this hot mess of a review. Next time!)
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But thank you so much for the lovely comment, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this.
(And ha, don't even worry, that happens to me all the time. I have an idea or something and then I read it in someone else's fic and think 'nooooo!' But I would never for a second assume you'd plagiarised.)
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