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missyjack

Mortal Companion

Feb 13, 2007 23:04

Title: Mortal Companion

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nixwilliams February 13 2007, 12:40:02 UTC

OH MY GOD! DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS?!?!?

ABJECT! ABJECT! oh, wow! the sheer wicked, sexual, sensual exuberance the demon has in possessing human bodies is awesome. it's so delightfully messy and physical. and all this while being funny. FANTASTIC.

of course, i also love that you've used GNPs. but then, that's not really a suprise, is it?!

one thing: second sentence in - "The demon been thrilled" - missing a word!

missyjack February 13 2007, 12:49:01 UTC

Big thanks to you matey - your f'back really helped me lift this story. I can't tell you what a thrill it is for me to have someone help me work on my writing. And I love that fandom gives me the space to get something like this read.

*rolls around in the sticky sticky love*

nixwilliams February 13 2007, 13:01:11 UTC

no worries!!! it was fun and OMG YOU PUT THE SHITTING IN! I AM SO HAPPY!

yeah, workshopping was always my fave bit of creative writing at uni - i love perving on people's unfinished business and poking around in there and MOULDING IT TO SUIT MY DESIRES! i mean, editing is fun, kids!

nixwilliams February 13 2007, 13:09:18 UTC

MOLDING it, even!

*has thoughts of spreading blue vein cheese over meg!demon and licking it off*

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jfc013 February 13 2007, 15:29:31 UTC

I'm AWAKE now! Whoo, hot! Wonderful stuff you've got here! *looks around for menthol ciggy* Oh, yeah--I don't smoke!

missyjack February 13 2007, 20:32:50 UTC

thanks. wasn't ure about this one so, glad you liked it.

zephyruscrowe February 13 2007, 16:02:12 UTC

I've decided I love you.
Yes, nothing less than that.

AWESOME Story! Fucking AWESOME!

missyjack February 13 2007, 20:33:26 UTC

Oh thank you so much! Wasn't sure about this one so, glad you liked it.

grrli February 16 2007, 04:19:22 UTC

See... missyjack is love. Toldjyas *S*

missyjack February 16 2007, 09:03:08 UTC

Yes - i am LOVE. sticky sticky love ;)

sharpest_rose February 13 2007, 20:44:32 UTC

*uses icon featuring A Demon*

This is cool. Like Nix said, the abjection is such a neat (or, well, MESSY) way of structuring a story of possession.

Plus, PAT CALIFIA TITLE. For the win. :D

missyjack February 13 2007, 23:22:57 UTC

Thnak you! Until you and Nix mentioned it, i hadn't explicity conceptualised this fic as being about abjection . Now I have gone all thinky about themes of abjection in Supernatural...

Also there's not a lot of tongue in this - but do you think this qualifies for the 'violated by demon tongue' challenge?

elmathelas February 13 2007, 20:57:40 UTC

If Meg was a meat puppet, ze was Jim Henson.

Awesome.

Actually, the whole thing is awesome. The seamless blending of the humor into the dark thoughts of the demon is really incredible.

missyjack February 13 2007, 23:23:59 UTC

Thank you so much. I actually didn't plan for the humopur but it just comes out in my writing, and luckily i think it fits with what we have seen of this demon.