Oh hell fuck. Am I glad I clicked on this link tonight? Hell yes. Whoa.
Haha, I’m sitting here panting after reading this. First that story you posted tonight and then this? This is just, you hit on one of my biggest and most secretive kinks with the whole ‘calling his partner daddy’ thing. I am speechless, but I’ll give reviewing a go, after I wipe down my seat :p Can I ask, the book you stole the title from? Is it anything like this story? Heh. Loved the title by the way. The connotation. I didn’t really know what to expect with the whole RPS thing, but you played it out bloody brilliantly.
I love the way you keep to the show with a mixture of humor and sarcasm and the way you paint Jeff and his feelings towards the show and Jensen and his role. I like that you make Jensen intense and I guess if I could have asked for anything, it would have been to keep up that intensity throughout because in this Jensen sort of seems to lose it at the sex part. But that’s fine, I mean this just shot to number one on my fic list so I’m really not in any position to complain.
Oh Kripke, so angsty, haha. I was waiting for a corn syrup and cochineal laced kiss, haha ew. I agree with the person who said, “I like that John notices Jensen’s fatigue early on, and it explains the part where he goes, “Stop the monologue and fuck me, [my reserves are shot].”
Jeff felt a twinge of something slightly paternal and something slightly, well, so not paternal. Oh John, you bad bad bad bad man. come to mama.
I loved that Jensen is so serious and committed to getting this right, and then he gets a nice reward, haha. Love the real pieces of dialogue and the plays on words, the way you twist them like I can imagine your mind would have when you were watching the ep.
The way you play out the words, Jensen’s quickening breath; it builds the suspense and the tension between them really well. I think the only thing to make this hotter would have been if it was actually on camera with kripke trying to film and the boys trying to hide the beginning of their arousal.
“Daddy please.” and that’s where you got me. It was as unexpected to me as it was to Jeff. Seeing it on the pages gets my loins moist woman. You have no idea what it does to me. And Jeff’s surprise? Priceless. Perfect. And the fact that Jensen doesn’t back down? That dirty little slut, I will love him forever now. So all the banter, all the ‘boy’’s, all the good boy’s and the pleases, and every single fucking one of the daddy’s coming from Jensen’s mouth was like the proverbial nail in the coffin that was killing me dead. My heart? Aching. I feel like I’ve just run a marathon. To read this twice (once to drool and once to review) is like torture. And the part about the stubble and Jensen watching his face, that just exemplifies the whole “older man”’ thing so kudos x 100, as does the fact he demands Jensen taste him, which is hot on its own standing also. When Jensen submits, turns around and gives himself to John and when John starts talking about teaching his son a lesson? Guh.
“I know my Daddy better than anyone, “Jensen whispered softly rubbing the Jeff’s hand across his face. “I know what you want.”
“Tell me, tell me what I want”. The two men stood close, pulling each other’s cock in a gentle rhythm.
“Fuck me daddy.”
“Please Daddy, please…” Jensen was pushing back hard against Jeff’s curling fingers. Jeff admired the view. The sight of Jensen’s tight ass on his hand was better than any porn.
“Feel you Daddy’s cock in your belly son? I’m going to fill it with my come.”
nnnngh. There goes another few nails. Especially the porn line, because OMGOSH so true!!
I don’t know how either of them could stand filming without imploding the next day because wow.
Now these few lines made me laugh my head off, because if I have ever seen a bad porn line, these would be it =P
Jeff’s beer can thick cock. “Guess no-one’s going to see beard rash on my ass Jeff” As he probed he could feel Jensen’s ass kissing back, and he knew what they both wanted now. bwahahahhaha and ew to that last one.
Despite that, I meant it when I said, favorite fic from spn. I have never read anything so hot in my life. Just the daddy thing... < 333
Well you've just made my day! so glad this pushed some kinky buttons for you.
The book Doing it for Daddy is a collection of short stories by different authors edited by Pat Califia. It features all manner of very hot Daddy!kink. The introduction by Califia is also great as it examines the politics and sociology of Daddy!kink. And why it is not about incest. A great book i'd highly recommend.
Haha, I’m sitting here panting after reading this. First that story you posted tonight and then this? This is just, you hit on one of my biggest and most secretive kinks with the whole ‘calling his partner daddy’ thing. I am speechless, but I’ll give reviewing a go, after I wipe down my seat :p
Can I ask, the book you stole the title from? Is it anything like this story? Heh. Loved the title by the way. The connotation. I didn’t really know what to expect with the whole RPS thing, but you played it out bloody brilliantly.
I love the way you keep to the show with a mixture of humor and sarcasm and the way you paint Jeff and his feelings towards the show and Jensen and his role. I like that you make Jensen intense and I guess if I could have asked for anything, it would have been to keep up that intensity throughout because in this Jensen sort of seems to lose it at the sex part. But that’s fine, I mean this just shot to number one on my fic list so I’m really not in any position to complain.
Oh Kripke, so angsty, haha. I was waiting for a corn syrup and cochineal laced kiss, haha ew. I agree with the person who said, “I like that John notices Jensen’s fatigue early on, and it explains the part where he goes, “Stop the monologue and fuck me, [my reserves are shot].”
Jeff felt a twinge of something slightly paternal and something slightly, well, so not paternal. Oh John, you bad bad bad bad man. come to mama.
I loved that Jensen is so serious and committed to getting this right, and then he gets a nice reward, haha. Love the real pieces of dialogue and the plays on words, the way you twist them like I can imagine your mind would have when you were watching the ep.
The way you play out the words, Jensen’s quickening breath; it builds the suspense and the tension between them really well. I think the only thing to make this hotter would have been if it was actually on camera with kripke trying to film and the boys trying to hide the beginning of their arousal.
“Daddy please.” and that’s where you got me. It was as unexpected to me as it was to Jeff. Seeing it on the pages gets my loins moist woman. You have no idea what it does to me. And Jeff’s surprise? Priceless. Perfect. And the fact that Jensen doesn’t back down? That dirty little slut, I will love him forever now. So all the banter, all the ‘boy’’s, all the good boy’s and the pleases, and every single fucking one of the daddy’s coming from Jensen’s mouth was like the proverbial nail in the coffin that was killing me dead. My heart? Aching. I feel like I’ve just run a marathon. To read this twice (once to drool and once to review) is like torture. And the part about the stubble and Jensen watching his face, that just exemplifies the whole “older man”’ thing so kudos x 100, as does the fact he demands Jensen taste him, which is hot on its own standing also. When Jensen submits, turns around and gives himself to John and when John starts talking about teaching his son a lesson? Guh.
“I know my Daddy better than anyone, “Jensen whispered softly rubbing the Jeff’s hand across his face. “I know what you want.”
“Tell me, tell me what I want”. The two men stood close, pulling each other’s cock in a gentle rhythm.
“Fuck me daddy.”
“Please Daddy, please…” Jensen was pushing back hard against Jeff’s curling fingers. Jeff admired the view. The sight of Jensen’s tight ass on his hand was better than any porn.
“Feel you Daddy’s cock in your belly son? I’m going to fill it with my come.”
nnnngh. There goes another few nails. Especially the porn line, because OMGOSH so true!!
I don’t know how either of them could stand filming without imploding the next day because wow.
Now these few lines made me laugh my head off, because if I have ever seen a bad porn line, these would be it =P
Jeff’s beer can thick cock.
“Guess no-one’s going to see beard rash on my ass Jeff”
As he probed he could feel Jensen’s ass kissing back, and he knew what they both wanted now. bwahahahhaha and ew to that last one.
Despite that, I meant it when I said, favorite fic from spn. I have never read anything so hot in my life. Just the daddy thing... < 333
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The book Doing it for Daddy is a collection of short stories by different authors edited by Pat Califia. It features all manner of very hot Daddy!kink. The introduction by Califia is also great as it examines the politics and sociology of Daddy!kink. And why it is not about incest. A great book i'd highly recommend.
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