FIC: "No Takebacks" House/Wilson, NC-17

[missviolet]

Sure has been awhile since I posted my last fic. Just in case anyone on the friends list was wondering what happened to MissV, I’m still around, just in stealth mode! I never stop writing, but it can be slow going sometimes, what with work, martial arts, volunteering, physical therapy, and working for my martial arts school one night a week, plus a

Comments

[elva_barr]

Oh, you talk about no plot, but you do have depth here. I mean, first, guuuuh because, my, this is a nice thing to cheer up one's day, and secondly, the bit about Wilson reading the finance section was funny and easy to empathize with, and the last paragraph is simply the sweetest thing, without being too cutesy.

(Typos, quietly mentioned for your convenience as per usual: Later Wilson might find... needs a comma after 'later', and Wilson assures him , as if it weren’t already obvious. has an unneeded extra space before the comma.)

[missviolet]

Oh, thanks, glad the friends haven't given up on me! I am thrilled that you liked it. Kurt Vonnegut said writing should advance the plot or develop the characters. Lacking plot, I opted for the latter with Wilson's point of view. Ah, you know I'm a romantic and fluffy sort of person, and I like to write them being real affectionate towards each other, even if the episodes suggest that House is curt and Wilson restrained, I take some liberties with the original characters.

I fixed those typos, thanks for spotting! I always feel better posting to the communities after I know you've read it.

[elva_barr]

Ah, a Vonnegut fan! Now I know your lack of semicolons amounts to someone. (I did love that man, too. Though of course I use semicolons to their death.)

Well, fear not, because your Wilson has definite intensity and measure.

[missviolet]

Oh, thanks, though I am a fan, I can't blame Vonnegut for my comma abuse and long list-like sentences. It's writing in the present tense; I find it tricky, but writing sex scenes in the past tense is also challenging because sex and anticipation go hand-in-hand. I think the present tense is more cinematic and visual but not as commonly used in short stories.

I am glad you liked my Wilson POV :)

[nekkidchick]

Hey there! Nice to see you! ♥

As usual, you freakin' rock. Yummmmmy.

Things I love:

Wilson's dirty thoughts.

“Still got a hard-on?”

The lotion, ohmygod... and House's two-handed grip? Guh.

“Give it up, Jimmy.” Nnnngggghhh. *dies*

Wilson taking charge didn't suck, either. Well, I mean he did... *snerk* but, yanno. XD

♥

[missviolet]

Oh, I am delighted the f-list is still around. So pleased you enjoyed it. It is hard to write sex scenes without repeating what you've already written in other stories. Or using the same words over and over and becoming formulaic. So it's great to see your comment and see that other people still find it sexy. Thank you!

[jouse]

I've missed this so much (:: yummylicious.

Good to have you back!

[missviolet]

Thanks, jouse! Aw, I've been missed, now that is nice to know. So glad you liked my fic and thanks for the feedback and for remaining on my f-list.

[elicia8]

Mmmmmmm, gorgeous. I love Wilson's "it's got to be both ways" demand. How diplomatic! ;)

I agree with elva_barr that this is hardly PWP. It's simplistic because it's just a scene, but that delicious depth of character absolutely shines through here, especially in the little details--Wilson thinking "I could do that for him" and House's boldness and good humor where sex is concerned (and Wilson's too, for that matter). And that totally makes it a story.

I love your writing! Thanks for posting this!

[missviolet]

I am happy that you think it deserves to be called a story. I had thought it was just smut but I've gotten the nicest comments about it. Thanks for the compliments! I am also a fan of your writing, especially your first-person fics. And your art!

[live_4_tennis]

Every time I read your House MD stories I always get a shiver. Your stories are so detailed and vivid that it's like I'm there watching them. I love it so much. There are no words that can properly describe how much I love reading your stories. And after reading this it's really hard to form proper words. ^.^

[missviolet]

Thank you! I do like to write lots of detailed descriptions. I am so glad you enjoyed the fic, thanks for the feedback.