YA fanfic

[misstakin]

Another post from me today but this is important THIS IS FANFICTION.

Title: [idek yet who wants to help me with this one]
Fandom: Marvel//Young Avengers
Characters/Pairings: Kate/Eli/Tommy. Yes.
Length: 2,223 motherfuckin' words.
Summary: Kate, Eli and Tommy are trying to work out how to function in a polyamorous relationship. Unsurprising to

Comments

I like it

[jazzypom]

The rivalry, and the fact that Eli and Tommy suck it up and deal. Go, Kate. Git it, git it.

Re: I like it

[misstakin]

She "wears the pants" so to speak.

LOL, I see what you did there

[jazzypom]

But really, the story worked. I only wished that Kate's pov was a bit more immediate, but I did like the push and pull of Eli and Tommy and how the story had the push and tug going through it.

Cheers for this.

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[misstakin]

Thanks! I realised a bit after the fact that her POV should have been constant, but this whole thing started with that first scene and I liked it so much and I honestly thought the whole thing was going to go in a different direction story-telling-wise. WHAT CAN YOU DO.

Re: (;

[jazzypom]

Lolz, you're a good lass, you are. I know what that's like. You like a little ditty of a piece that you've just done, and think, "Oooh, where shall this story go, then."