Comments | missnyah: Raising Mt. Olympus, part 2

missnyah

Raising Mt. Olympus, part 2

Jan 29, 2009 09:51

Title: Raising Mt. Olympus: Hunter
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG, for now
Summary: He walked to her across the waves.... 2by2fics. Progression. Orion.
Characters: River, Jayne
Timeline: Post BDM
Disclaimer: Joss, Joss, Jossity, Joss

( ...and lost his eyes to her father's anger. )

firefly fic

Comments 6

idyllictorture January 29 2009, 08:14:41 UTC

Really nice work. I can't wait to read more. I can almost taste the sediment on my teeth too.

Just a really minor nitpik. Did you mean "into the Blank" or "into the Black"?

missnyah January 29 2009, 09:56:02 UTC

Ha! I didn't even stop to think that that might be confusing. I meant Blank. River and Jayne are, as hinted, on Jayne's home world. The vast deser there is referred to as the Blank. But without the forthcoming background you're right that is ambiguous!

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missnyah January 30 2009, 06:30:54 UTC

Thanks very much. I'm having a great time with 2by2 and letting the prompts string it along.

leven_kemal February 17 2009, 19:27:47 UTC

I thought they were in trouble before, but it just keeps getting better and better for them, doesn't it? :)

You've evoked a great atmosphere here, the gritty real world details becoming heightened and even surreal through River's perception of them.

And I really like this world you've created, with its seasons, and how its inhabitants have adapted to it.

missnyah February 18 2009, 01:46:57 UTC

Thanks very much for taking the time to read some of my stuff.

I love all the possibilities for human adaptation in the many worlds of the Firefly 'verse. I'm having fun with this little moon

theneis July 24 2010, 23:19:37 UTC

Great fic!