Revised Band Lineup for Jupiter Knocks:
James "Jamie" A. Edwards - Lead singer and non-bassist
Isaiah "Izzy" Thompson - Rhythm guitar and homeopathic remedies
Jason Flynn - Drums and beer
Louis Whitaker - Lead guitar and whining
Chester K. Archer - Lyrics and melodies/tunes; occasional vocalist
Izzy and Louis' responsibilities switched because I kept confusing them. I decided that if I confused them that much, they're obviously supposed to switch, so.
So far, I'm really pleased with the way PiNTotL is coming along, except for the end. I'm not sure if I should cut the whole revelation and band-reaction bit or not; it's not super-vital to the plot, after all. It's got some silly Jason/Izzy interaction but that's about it. Plus it's a little confusing, I think, to have it there and follow it up with the next bit, where they get encouragement from strangers with fetishes*.
Maybe I just need a nap. It's Saturday, after all, and I can nap if I want to.
* Not really.
Isaiah "Izzy" Thompson - Rhythm guitar and homeopathic remedies
Jason Flynn - Drums and beer
Louis Whitaker - Lead guitar and whining
Chester K. Archer - Lyrics and melodies/tunes; occasional vocalist
Izzy and Louis' responsibilities switched because I kept confusing them. I decided that if I confused them that much, they're obviously supposed to switch, so.
So far, I'm really pleased with the way PiNTotL is coming along, except for the end. I'm not sure if I should cut the whole revelation and band-reaction bit or not; it's not super-vital to the plot, after all. It's got some silly Jason/Izzy interaction but that's about it. Plus it's a little confusing, I think, to have it there and follow it up with the next bit, where they get encouragement from strangers with fetishes*.
Maybe I just need a nap. It's Saturday, after all, and I can nap if I want to.
* Not really.