Scared Stiff

Aug 24, 2005 13:54



Title: Scared Stiff
Author: misskitti
Rating: shamelessly NC-17
Pairing: Domlijah
Warning: I love those rides, but scary isn't for everyone. Then again, this isn't really scary…more sexy.
Disclaimer: Yeah yeah, we know. Don't own 'em, don't claim stuff. Same goes for the actual ride, which I've been on. ( The actual ride is in Rehoboth Beach DE, its great. See?)
Beta: My loving knickerlace
Archives: Back in my little corner.
Summary: Dom doesn't like those kind of things. Elijah is bound and determined to prove him wrong.
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"Awww C'mon Dom! Please?" Puppy dog eyes begged from underneath a fringe of soft brown curls. Dominic was never quite able to deny that face.
"You know how I feel about those damn things Lij, I don't like all that…stuff." He frowned. "Plus, that's one hellacious line. I'd rather go play skeeball or something."
"But Dommie...it's my favorite…" those soft eyes were now tearing up, and Dom could see Elijah's lower lip start to tremble and stick out.
"Damnit." He glowered. "Fine. We'll go."
Elijah squealed and bounced around him. Snatching Dom's hand he dragged him to the tail end of the line. With his free arm Dom pulled the last few tickets from his pocket and counted.
"Last ride Lij. No more tickets." He smiled inwardly; he wasn't one for these cheap boardwalk rides anyway. Once the tickets were gone, he could go play games. Maybe the shooting gallery. He ought to win a bear or something for Elijah, he'd love that. As they snaked through the long line, he watched Lij's face contort in bursts of glee. With every car that disappeared through the dusty doors, the young man's eyes lit up. Every time a terribly fake thunderclap that issued forth from the cheap speakers, Lij jumped. Dom tried to ignore the inane babble of the crowd around him. He never was one for large groups. In the distant background he could hear the light crash of the waves over the bumper cars. At one end, he could almost see the moon hanging low over the waterline. Suddenly, Lij squealed, and Dom looked in front of them. One snot nosed kid and his terrified little sister were between them and the next car.
"Shit." Too fast they'd reached the beginning of the line. Dom grimaced.
"Dommie! Language! There are little kids here!" Elijah glared at him, pouting. Dom grinned and fluffed Lij's curls.
"I know, luvey, and one day you'll be a big boy too, I promise." His fingers twirled one particularly sleek curl around and around. Lij smiled at him with that goofy grin that was all his.
"Ahem." Came a rough cough from their left. "If you gents don't mind..." the rugged ride attendant gestured to the empty car in front of them, and then at the long line of impatient kids behind them. Dm blushed, pushing Elijah into the seat hurriedly. As he settled himself onto the well worn bench, the attendant cranked the bar down across their laps, tightening it within an inch of its life.
"Oi, I've got organs in there ya know!" Dom pushed the bar back up a bit before the attendant locked it, smiling.
"Have a nice ride!" he grinned at them, stepping back. He pressed a button and the car lurched forward, towards a pair of dusty beaten doors.
Dom could feel Elijah squirming next to him. Taking his eyes off the door for a second, he glared at the gleeful young man.
"You owe me. I fucking hate haunted houses." And just as his line of sight turned back to the doors, they went crashing into them. The hinges creaked badly. The car rose up on the suspended rail, and he could see a mirror in front of them. As the doors crashed behind him he could just barely see the hint of a third person in the car before the light vanished. He scooted closer to Lij, who was still squirming.
"Lij, you know I hate the dark…and would you please quit squirming?!" he held the young man close.
"Trust me Dom. This'll be the best ride ever!" Lij's voice floated through the darkness as they rose higher and to the right. The crack of the fake thunder felt more real now, shaking his bones. Lij giggled, and sat patiently. As they crested the rise, Dom could make out bouncing shapes in the dark. Gravestones and cobwebs were littered along a long hallway. Lij began to squirm again. Dom cursed, letting the boy go, and scooting farther to the left side of the carriage. Lij giggled more, and Dom blanched as he felt the carriage sway.
"STOP THAT! Lij! Jaysus, you're freaking me out here! Quit it!"
Silence. As they progressed down the hallway, badly made skeletons and monsters popped out from behind foam gravestones. Not very scary, but the surprise still made Dom jump. He slid his arm over to the right to grab a hold of Elijah, but to his surprise, found nothing. His eyes bugged out in the blacklight glow. He was so scared that he didn't notice the weight of the bar lift. As the car creaked again and swayed precariously, he started to shake. He shook so hard that he didn't notice the light hands at his belt. Or his zipper. It was only when he felt a warm wet tongue snailing its way down his stomach, lower still, that he realized anything was amiss.
What the…" Dom's words were cut off by a finger at his lips, bidding him to be silent. He slipped his hands down and found Lij's curly headed mop thoroughly ensconced in his groin. Dom groaned when the tongue rubbed over the lip of his jeans. A big red devil face loomed before them as Lij's hands freed his straining cock from the denim confines. Dom jumped as simultaneously a ghostly shape whizzed past his face and Lij's hot wet mouth captured the tight head of his cock. Dom groaned and closed his eyes tight, slipping his fingers into Lij's hair.
"Jaysus, Lij, what the fuck are you..." again the finger returned to silence him. The car shuddered as they hit the red devil face, a face which proved to be another door. Elijah slowly licked up and down the length of Dom's thick hard manhood, covering every inch with his soft velvety tongue. Dom's eyes, now closed, flew open when he heard the babble of a crowd and felt the cool night air hit his flushed face. They were crawling across a brightly lit balcony, two floors above the boardwalk.
"Lij…" he groaned, trying to pull the mouth away from his pulsing rod, "Lij! The people….they can see" Lij chuckled. The light vibrations sent a chill up Dom's spine.
"Nah," whispered Lij over a mouthful of Dom, "Too far up, only see you." He only let loose a few words before he returned his attention to the pressing matter before him. Dom groaned again as he felt himself grow impossibly longer, thicker, harder under the ministrations of the soft lips. He tried to ignore the crowd of voices on the boardwalk, as they passed through another set of doors. Back into darkness they went.
The rest of the scary effects seemed a blur to Dom as Elijah worked his mouth up and down his cock, licking and sucking the whole length. He felt hands reach up under his shirt and tweak his nipples. As bouncing neon spiders jumped up and down in a dark mirrored room, reflected in those same mirrors was the bobbing head of Elijah, blowing the life out of Dom's hard shaft. He groaned when Elijah paused to run his tongue up the underside of his cock, swirling the tip lightly with a slick swipe. The growls of the Werewolf mannequin were simultaneous with Dom's growls of pleasure when Lij took first one, then both of his tight balls in his mouth. When the undead cowboy took potshots at the carriage with a badly aimed plastic gun, he felt Lij's hands sneak down, one reaching to cup his balls, while the other wrapped itself around his shaft. Lij's mouth stayed attached to the slick head, laving the tip with wide strokes. As Frankenstein's monster rose from the slab jerkily, he felt himself twitch and buck into Lij's mouth, full near to bursting.
Lij giggled over his mouthful, bobbing harder and faster. He knew what was coming. As they passed into a completely darkened room he worked Dom's cock furiously, feeling the flesh tighten and pulse beneath his lips. He heard Dom's breath quicken, and felt the hands in his hair grasp the locks harder. Smiling inwardly, he snuck his hand farther back, pressing lightly into that tender spot just between Dom's thighs.
Dom felt his release come crashing over him, spasming and staring wide eyed into the darkness. Simultaneously, the final effect appeared. Right in front of them the façade of a bus came to life, lights blazing, horn blaring loudly. Inches from their car, Dom shouted as he came, spurting hot cum all over Lij's mouth, half from pleasure half from terror. Rocking hard and pumping himself into Lij's throat. At the last second the car made a hard jerk to the left, and the blazing bus front faded into darkness. Dom shuddered, the last of his orgasm washing over him in waves of warmth.
Just as quick as they had turned, Lij stuffed him back into his pants, zipped him up, and relocked the lap bar. It was a good thing too, for within a millisecond of the lap bar clicking into place, they hit the final set of doors and returned to the land of the living. Dom could only sit there, completely spent, as the cacophony of the teacups and ringing of bells hit him. Nearly blinded by the bright neon lights around him, he could only blink hard when the attendant lifted the lap bar up, and gestured for him to exit the car. Elijah had to help him out, and near carried him away from the ride, past the long line waiting for their turn. His face was pale and deathly white as they passed two little girls. Lij winked at them, and all Dom could do was stutter.
"Guh." He muttered. Elijah grinned and lifted him a bit, one arm under and around him.
"Time to go home Dommie, I think you've had enough fun for tonight." He whispered. Dom nodded from the glow or orgasm he was still basking in.
As they walked away arm in arm, the two towheaded little girls looked at each other, eyes wide. The little one began to tear up.
"Momeeeeee! I don't wanna go on that ride!" she cried. "It scared a grown-up!" Her mother looked over, and then at the two men her daughter was pointing at.
She saw Dom slip one hand down Lij's backside, cupping his as lightly. Lij butted his hip against Dom, and both giggled. She blanched.
"That's okay sweetie. I don't think that man was really scared…." She smiled after them. "You know, maybe your father and I should go for a ride too….for old time's sake."
The little girls stared at their mother's dreamy face, then at the receding backsides of Dom and Lij as they sauntered their way to the boardwalk, hand in hand. They shrugged. Adults.

slash-fic

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