When rules change, Chapter 1 part a

[missisjoker]

Title: When rules change (working title!)
Author: MissisJoker
Warnings: bad grammar XD

Fill for the prompt from my dear accomplice

Comments

[vardek]

It's brilliant and hilarious! I like how perfectly true you showed Thor at the beginning of movie!verse. It's him from the top of his helmet down to the soles of his boots. It's his not so hidden rage and unwillingness to hold the anger, and the easiness to accept the praise. And I absolutely loved Loki. Quiet and observant, and making conclusions from the tiniest little details of his surroundings, and not so quickly bought by humble and polite words and gestures. And oh, so sadly disbelieving that someone may find him attractive while in the presence of his bigger, taller, mightier brother. His genuine surprise when girls were discussing him - one of the definite highlights of this piece of chapter.
Son of Coul, he-he, jup! It's definitely him. ))) Buckets of love for him from me, hope there will be more of him.
Steve... I like how he in the end chose to approach loki. I don't know yet, why he did so. May be a mix of warrior wariness at the sight of someone who is clearly thinking straight and keeps himself on guard - it should be very visible how different brother's reaction is to the SHIELD welcoming party. It also may be a curiosity to the silent dark prince, the striking contrast to booming loud to easily trusting and open Thor.
Oh, ups, didn't mean to write another unending reviews.
Bless you, my dear, your story is amazing and I just can't stop smiling thinking of all the wonderful possibilities and different roads it can take. Thanks a lot! And already can't wait for the update. ;-)

UPD: Oh, was leaving my favorite girl for the last and ended forgetting about her completely. Darcy!!! Love!!! She is seriously and totally my most favorite girl. I would love to hear more of her unique attitude and awesomeness.