Shifting

Sep 28, 2010 18:46


Prompt: Excitement
Title: Shifting
Author: lectura35 
Characters/Ship: Ron/Hermione
Rating/Warning: PG
Word Count: 304
A/N: Thanks so much, Jenn ;)

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pigwithhair September 28 2010, 22:07:11 UTC
You know, I'd never there of burn marks, though it makes sense. Magic can leaves marks - think of Ron's wrists after the DofM. Wise idea. And well executed. Thanks for that. :)

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lectura35 September 29 2010, 20:47:48 UTC
Thanks so much! I´m glad you liked it :)

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mollywheezy September 28 2010, 22:36:01 UTC
So sweet! I absolutely love that Ron kissed Hermione's wound. Very original and well-written! :D

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lectura35 September 29 2010, 20:49:09 UTC
Thank you for reviewing! :)

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wordsmithsonian September 28 2010, 23:07:03 UTC
I love the way you've characterized Ron here so perfectly, through his actions rather than his words. It just fits so well with his character and is really, incredibly sweet.

Thanks for giving me a break from studying!

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lectura35 September 29 2010, 20:51:10 UTC
Oh, I´m so glad you found him in character :) I always worry about that.
Now.. back to your studies! Go, go, go!

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aloemilk September 29 2010, 01:32:41 UTC
He was taking the worst night in all her life, and imprinting a memory there that wasn’t shaded with despair and anguish. And he was doing it in the best way he knew how, through his actions.

Oh, Mely, how beautiful!

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lectura35 September 29 2010, 20:52:38 UTC
Thanks so much, hon!
I´m thrilled you enjoyed it :=)

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otterandterrier September 29 2010, 01:48:00 UTC
Great missing moment! After Shell Cottage, I do believe that something very intimate must have become solid fact between them, and I love your take on this ^-^
Her knight... *sigh*

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lectura35 September 29 2010, 20:59:09 UTC
I do believe that something very intimate must have become solid fact between them

Totally agreed!
Something must have happened... Maybe a kiss, a confession, a talk,... something. I think that was a breaking point.
Thank you, dear!
*sighing with you about "her knight"*

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