writing

Mar 07, 2008 03:35

something i've been in a severe personal drought of for more than a year now
i think some of it might be coming back to me
i'm not really sure
but this is the second piece i've pulled together in the past 24 hours... and that's news
so i'm posting it here to see if anyone happens to take notice.
if you read it, please let me know what you thought?
i know the meter's fucked.. you'll have to try and find it on your own but i assure you it exists
it's a good piece for a reading i think.

anyway.
it's on you.
xo.

'if i told you i was passionate would you find me rather fashionable?
admire the glamour with which i sache across a room like this
and do a little twist
tilt my head and grin with bliss
your eyes like tennis table tranced would dart about my frame and drink me in with one long glance
you'd sigh
and you'd swoon to touch my thigh
but you keep silent
your libido may be violent
but your manner's far too quaint
to act like the ape you ain't
so you mumble something clever
compromise to get the better of your casanovan ways'

though you may not be the king of getting her to swing your thing under her hips
you've come to grips with instincts carnal that tend to bend both fate and darn well she howe'er you please
which is not to say one wink 's a guarantee to get her on her knees
it's just that's she's the kind of girl who could be into flingy fun
you could smell it far away, it's scent enticing
now she sparkles here before you like a blister in the sun
some words you'd surely love to say... however dicey.

'so keep still a moment longer dear so i can take a picture with my thoughts
it's getting hot
in here or is it only me? look at the time, oh deary me
i should be going'
'but you've only just arrived' she chides
so you yelp back 'i'm like the tide, i'm in and out before your eyes, and sometimes quicker'
he blushes then, he sees the err of words in what was meant and what was heard...
a fixer:
'i mean, i make good haste with visits, but chase one's pleasure deep exquisite by the mile'
'so stay awhile!'
'i do hope my innuendo has not tempted to offend those ears so pleasant.'
almost a true gent

he departs with gracious bow and pretends he wouldn't really like to plow her
catches breath, adjusts his pants and then does a little dance
coulda had her, blew his chance
but he's surely going back there in an hour
to devour her

m.r.b.g.
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