Real Madrid Castilla/ Juvenil A Fic ~ written for footballverse
Titel: Memories
Characters: José Luis Mato Sanmartín {Joselu} / Jesé Rodríguez Ruiz {Jesé}
Rating: G
Word count: 330
Disclaimer: I don't own these two Real Madrid youth players. Joselu is striker and plays for the Castilla, Jesé is a striker which plays for the Juvenil A, another Real Madrid youth team.
Beta candream and spain_fanatic79
@ spain_fanatic79 Thank you for your ideas which you add in this story ♥
"Hier bin ich damals zur Schule gegangen."
There was a little sadness in Joselu's voice.
"What language is that? I’ve never heard it before in my life."
Jesé looked to his friend and then both looked to the huge school building.
"That was German. I still remember a few things learned here in this school."
"Sounds interesting. Tell me more about it, what you remember from your time here."
Both boys went to a small bank and sat down.
They sat in silence for a little while before Joselu broke it.
"One of my best memories is that I had a good friend here. Her name was Nadja and she came from Russia. We spent lots of time together. Doing our homeworks together, spending a lot of time in the big park in the city with our friends, and doing other things.” Joselu smiled. It was a good time.
"You were born here, right? I think you told me one day."
Jesé looked off to the side a few feet and saw two girls. He saw no backpacks or other school things. Both girls were talking. The one girl had a cup from Starbucks in her left hand.
"Yes. We had a little talk about it. I said that when we visited my hometown I would show you a few places in this city."
"Have you any idea where your friend Nadja is?" Jesé asked Joselu curiously.
"No. I have no idea." Joselu answered, sighing.
Another heavy silence followed.
"Have you tried searching for her? I mean you have a good chance to find her Facebook or something. I can help you. It's no problem." "That is a good idea. Thank you that you will help me." And a little bit quieter "I really hope that I will find her with your help."
Joselu thought Jese’s idea was very good
"If you know her full name, I think we find her soon."
Both stood up and walked away.
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It was my first try with a Betareader. I'm Newbie but it I had a lots of fun to create this one shoot story. I think I will write my second soon.
If you have an idea let me know it [no slash in the moment, comes in the future when I am a little bit better]. If you have an idea about a possible pairing [Juvenil A - Castilla/ my focus is on the Real Madrid youth teams] then let me know it. Tipps and your feedback are very welcome too (:
Hope that you will enjoy this short story (:
Characters: José Luis Mato Sanmartín {Joselu} / Jesé Rodríguez Ruiz {Jesé}
Rating: G
Word count: 330
Disclaimer: I don't own these two Real Madrid youth players. Joselu is striker and plays for the Castilla, Jesé is a striker which plays for the Juvenil A, another Real Madrid youth team.
Beta candream and spain_fanatic79
@ spain_fanatic79 Thank you for your ideas which you add in this story ♥
"Hier bin ich damals zur Schule gegangen."
There was a little sadness in Joselu's voice.
"What language is that? I’ve never heard it before in my life."
Jesé looked to his friend and then both looked to the huge school building.
"That was German. I still remember a few things learned here in this school."
"Sounds interesting. Tell me more about it, what you remember from your time here."
Both boys went to a small bank and sat down.
They sat in silence for a little while before Joselu broke it.
"One of my best memories is that I had a good friend here. Her name was Nadja and she came from Russia. We spent lots of time together. Doing our homeworks together, spending a lot of time in the big park in the city with our friends, and doing other things.” Joselu smiled. It was a good time.
"You were born here, right? I think you told me one day."
Jesé looked off to the side a few feet and saw two girls. He saw no backpacks or other school things. Both girls were talking. The one girl had a cup from Starbucks in her left hand.
"Yes. We had a little talk about it. I said that when we visited my hometown I would show you a few places in this city."
"Have you any idea where your friend Nadja is?" Jesé asked Joselu curiously.
"No. I have no idea." Joselu answered, sighing.
Another heavy silence followed.
"Have you tried searching for her? I mean you have a good chance to find her Facebook or something. I can help you. It's no problem." "That is a good idea. Thank you that you will help me." And a little bit quieter "I really hope that I will find her with your help."
Joselu thought Jese’s idea was very good
"If you know her full name, I think we find her soon."
Both stood up and walked away.
~~~~
It was my first try with a Betareader. I'm Newbie but it I had a lots of fun to create this one shoot story. I think I will write my second soon.
If you have an idea let me know it [no slash in the moment, comes in the future when I am a little bit better]. If you have an idea about a possible pairing [Juvenil A - Castilla/ my focus is on the Real Madrid youth teams] then let me know it. Tipps and your feedback are very welcome too (:
Hope that you will enjoy this short story (: