Life: Jack's Story - part four

[miss_shine]

Here it is the fourth installment

Comments

[dr_is_in]

Gah! No! Don't end it there! Come back and fix my Janto!

[miss_shine]

Don't panic I wouldn't have broken them if I couldn't fix them, I promise. More soon, you'll see what I mean... they have got a long road ahead of them. CAN'T SAY ANYMORE!!
Torture me all you like I won't ruin the ending.

[dr_is_in]

I shall have faith....**sniffle**

[miss_shine]

Yes keep the faith and don't cry more tomorrow... promise

oooooohhhh Jack!

[asia27]

I gotta find the rest of this ... poor Jack! This isn't quite like Ianto to bust Jack...but I love it!

Re: oooooohhhh Jack!

[miss_shine]

Don't panic, more soon. Jack and Ianto will get... there in the end - LONG road ahead through. *sighs*

[adelle79]

Ok, now I'm crying. Although I am surprised Ianto hadn't felt the baby move by now. Jack should have told him earlier, but nothing, *nothing*, makes it ok for Ianto to call him a freak. I'm heartbroken for Jack.

Can't wait for the next part. =)

[miss_shine]

Ah, if Ianto had felt the baby moving it would have ruin my plot, so lets call it artistic lience! I know its unrealistic I worried about it for ages, but hoped no one would notice.
Really happy that you still like it through

[drewdamis]

I'm in tears. I'm a puddle on the floor. Granted, I've been crying since an earlier part when Jack told Ianto he loves him. Can't wait to see how this ends.

[miss_shine]

Oh please don't cry *hands over a box of tissues* it takes them a while but things eventually... well that would be saying wouldn't it?

[addled_nutcase]

This is very well done. I can not wait to read the ending.

[miss_shine]

Thanks, glad you like it