Comments | miss_izzy92: fic: get into my car, got a bad desire (1/2)

miss_izzy92

fic: get into my car, got a bad desire (1/2)

Mar 29, 2013 00:10

And he would never refuse a lady.

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She’s never done anything like this before. She’d been sitting at the bar in her little black dress (everybody should have one, her mother says, the sun gleaming off her scalp), looking terribly out of place, and not feeling it. He walked in, smelling of abandon and motor oil, recklessness and wind.

He buys her ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fandom: once upon a time, char: aurora, char: captain hook, genre: au, pairing: hook/aurora

Comments 6

honeymink March 29 2013, 09:51:24 UTC

I like this a lot. The AU setting fits the characters, your use of language is effortless.

He can’t resist the jab.

“He’s dead.”

The smile couldn’t have left his face faster if she had slapped it off.

My favourite lines along with the whole last part.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

miss_izzy92 March 29 2013, 13:24:54 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :')

volcitza March 29 2013, 10:37:39 UTC

OH MY GOD IZZY THIS IS SIMPLY WONDERFUL!!!
well, the setting is gold, your atmosphere is perfectly rendered; AND THAT FINALE IZZY
this is so so so well done girl I'll certainly make a post about it tonight (I've sworn off tumblr for the day)
it would be perfect even as a standalone but now i can't wait for you to publish the second part! (Why not on AO3? I could bookmark it there sigh)
More words about the fic tonight, I've got to go veeery quickly now :/
But honestly you should write more (and you've made me care about these two again? wow???)
love you, Ari (volchitza)

miss_izzy92 March 29 2013, 13:30:34 UTC

BABY GIRL, I LIKE LJ! And I don't have a ao3 account, I had a ff.net account for a long time but I haven't posted there in years.
I do want to write more but I've been very busy with my classes.

and you've made me care about these two again?
muwahahaha.
nah, I get it, ever since killian started having that commited relationship with linolium, i thought better to stay mostly away from that trainwreck (but this is an au, so i'm freeee)

ladyinthetardis April 11 2013, 16:54:48 UTC

Absolutely amazing!! I love the entire feeling of it, 'cause I'm quite a fan of "americana" setting. Even though I'm not a Hook/Aurora shipper, this is beautifully written. I just feel like listening to Lana del Rey while reading this. Your writing just flows.

miss_izzy92 April 11 2013, 18:13:57 UTC

Hey, funny, but I was listening to Lana when i wrote this (title - lucky ones)
And I'm glad you like it, honey