well so far none in the inner circle have turned out to be croats-in-transition. but wtf is cait? more importantly, wtf is hannah with bb!danny? ugh and why is cas still trapped when he could be spreading his bamfery all over the place in the name of dean/daniel my god i'm such a nervous wreck rn because SWEET BB!DANNY WHERE HE GO???? D:
Just when you thought things couldn’t get any worse with the last chapter, THIS chapter sneaks up and bites you in the ass ;) So many questions, so many worries… isn’t it wonderful? Mwa ha ha! And the bigger question… is this as bad as it gets, or is going to get much, much worse… even if he’s not the praying type, Dean might want to start praying for Danny
ffs i'm not even the praying type & i might just. ugh why do you have to be such a wonderful writer of tension and turmoil and suspense when you could've just given us (read:me) fluff on with a cloud of smiles?
once, long ago, I read a quote about literature and how stories are built around strife and sadness, and the quote was "there's no drama in happiness"... so that's basically your answer :D
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg I'm in like full on panic mode. Cas is trapped and now DANIEL IS MISSING. OMG. You're gonna give me a heart attack. I cannot even fathom how terrified Dean is right now.
Panic mode in reader achieved *marks item off to-do list* But seriously, yay that you are freaking out so much right now, because that means you're invested in the story! :)
Omg! Omg! OMG! i didn't even realize you had posted the last chapter and then I saw this one and I read them and OMG! All of the feelings! Where is poor sweet little Daniel! You wouldn't kill him--right!?
Wow everything is going to shit. That was so intense and I have to say I am loving your original characters. Nathan is great and Hannah was awesome. I love how you show a nonhunter woman protecting a baby and being so strong considering everything. Really really great job!
Yet another reader spazzing out about the state of things in The Shattered One… score! :D Because if you guys didn’t care either way at this point, it would mean I’m doing a shit job writing this fic.
I wouldn’t kill Daniel….? Or would I?
Things are most definitely going to shit! Forget the handbasket, express elevator to hell! And thanks! Really happy to hear that you like the OCs, too. Let’s face it, most often OCs are reviled and wanted dead the moment they show up in SPN.
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i'm pouting until you update.
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*keeps reading the chapter*
told ya.
this proably won't improve Dean's self steem: the oen day he gets to watch the kid, he loses him. tsk, tsk...
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And losing his son not more than an hour or so after Cas left him with the kid is going to really wreck Dean's ego :(
Cas is going to be so pissed... you know, when/if he gets free of Lucifer's trap ;)
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Wow everything is going to shit. That was so intense and I have to say I am loving your original characters. Nathan is great and Hannah was awesome. I love how you show a nonhunter woman protecting a baby and being so strong considering everything. Really really great job!
Please, oh please, update soon. I'm dying here!
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I wouldn’t kill Daniel….? Or would I?
Things are most definitely going to shit! Forget the handbasket, express elevator to hell! And thanks! Really happy to hear that you like the OCs, too. Let’s face it, most often OCs are reviled and wanted dead the moment they show up in SPN.
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