Happy Birthday, Redno Unnie [2/2]
Title: Drowning
Author: miss2l
Pairing(s): YeWon, minor: KiSung, YeHae, YeHyuk, mentioned!KyuSung, broken!YeTeuk
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, Romance, Drama
Disclaimer: I wish I owned them T.T
Summary: He couldn’t help it, so he drowned himself in sex.
A/N: I’m so sorry this is late Unnie… But happy birthday! I’m so sorry this is so failwhale…
( And now Yesung felt like he was drowning in love. )
should i kiss u? hug u? or throw kkoming to u? *not gonna throw my baby cloud :P*
it's yewon, finally! yeay!!! *waving yewon flag* and so so small part of kyusung. still can't believe this, my baby leann wrote a not-so-visible kyusung XD and it's for me! *proud* muahahaha
u know, i kinda surprised since u didn't write yesung in the cute way. i feel like yesung's chara in here is the usual yesung that we've seen in real life *haha like i'm close to him*. it's good coz i'm kinda bored with cute and whiny yeye. he looks manly in here as a bottom :D well, maybe lil bit diva in here with all those alpha males around him... no males can ignore diva yesung's request :D
yes, u wrote jealous-siwon! but i have to add more whack to siwon's head coz god damn it, show it that u're jealous u stupid horse! he's too well-manner that makes me hate him for being so composed seeing his love of his life getting snatched away...
and u wrote twins kyu-bum. this is the worst combo ever *especially for yesung XD* i can smell their mischievous and sneaky act even from here... LOL
i have to quote this 'The older boy may have slim legs that girls would kill for, but he sure as hell packed a punch. Er… kick.' u really have a kink for yesung's slimy leg, huh? XD u made me start to think that yesung is really a girl, like really with his beautiful face, slender figure, small waist, and slim legs. i have to hate him for this but i can't T~~T *pathetic fangirl XD*
when u said adam apple, i always thought that yesung almost doesn't have it. i mean, look at his neck carefully, do u see it? his neck is beautiful, wipe ur drool, baby :P so do u see it? is it my eyes or yesung really doesn't have it???
but why? why do u have to write yesung being bedded all over the place? i don't have the heart to imagine it T~T and it's for grabbing the attention of stupid siwon *choke siwon to death* i knew he done that also to relieve his stress and hurt feeling but seriously, didn't he have another option? all those pervert males *including ur kyu* are just using him. oh god, my baby cloud T~~T if u need comfort u can come to me not to that evil twins *wink wink* XD
and oh my god, i have to make some space for this. U.wrote.a.yewon.smut.for.me *death*
what? how?? did u?? and u even wrote an inexperience siwon as top XDD LOL!!! i have to LOL-ed so hard for that *sorry siwon :P* like seriously being taught by the bottom, if i were siwon than my man's pride is gone right from the start >0< let's hope that starting from now on yesung will teach him well *evil smirk*
oh my dear BABY leann *hugs, showers u with kisses* thank you, BIG THANK YOU FOR THIS. what am i deserve something like this? T~T *sobs* u're too good to be my dongsaeng. oh, how i wish i have a birthday in every month so u could write this kind of fic every month for me XDD
thank you is not enough *pinches ur cheeks* i'll give u baby hae as the reward :D
THANK YOU, BABY LEANN ~(^0^)~
LOVE U *smooches*
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*runs away* :P
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I'm sure this is terrible T.T but thank you anyway Unnie. I would very much appreciate getting a Yesung all to myself but we all know that's impossible XD
I had to minimize Kyu or he'd start taking over the fic all over again T.T
Well, I felt that my Yesung needed some tweaking and I do remember you telling me that you wanted a diva Yesung so I tried that out ^.^ not gonna be my usual Yesung but it was fun to write. I'm trying to make Yesung a little less girly in my fics, he is just so... girly >.<
LOL your original request was jealous!Siwon :P So of course I had to include it!!
KyuBum twins are seriously my secret fetish. I love writing them as twins. Like how I love writing YeChul brothers (with Heechul as the over protective older brother~)
HAVE YOU NOT SEEN HIS LEGS!?!? they're to die for T.T I WANT THEM! this is coming from real life experience ok, I would kill to get those legs :P
He does have one, all males do. It's quite unnoticeable though. He has to tilt his head really far back for you to see it :P
The idea behind Yesung's actions were just to make Siwon jealous originally but then the concept of trying to forget about his first love came in :P So it's basically he was trying to make Siwon jealous and trying to forget about his unrequited loves with Teukie and Wonnie.
(AND EVERYONE LOVES KYUSUNG SO IT'S OK FOR KYU TO BE A PERV OK XD)
It was awkward and I suck at writing YeWon and smut T.T
Siwon has been in love with Yesung all his life, he's a virgin, of course he has no idea what he's doing XD It would be totally unrealistic if he knew exactly what to do :P
OMG you'd never get birthday presents if it's every month cuz i'd be like 2 months late every time XD It'd be an endless cycle. it's really ok Unnie~ I wanted to write you something ^.^
LOL CAN I HAVE BABY YESUNGIE TOO??
You're welcome ^.^ Love you Unnie~ <33
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and yeay for my A mark!! ~\(^0^)/~ thx teacher leann~
i guess if u dun remember that i requested for yewon then u would go kyusung all over. Well, i dun mind if it’s not for my bday fic :P
Haha yep, finally u wrote a rather manly yesung. I know he’s bottoming in most of the fic but that doesn’t mean he has to be a shy and blushing yeye all the time! >.< diva yesung will beat heechul in a moment, i’m sure :P
I need my jealous-siwon dose like i need my sugar.. his intimidating stare to the other members when they hugged yesung is so god damn winning that i crave for this kind of chara in fic!
I read some kyubum twins before... they made god evil couple :P the bros are usually kyubum, yechul or 2woon. And kangin being the overprotective hyung is daebak :D
Okay, dear, i get that... just dun kill our yesungie for his legs okay? XD
I actually catch ur ideas.. but the thing that pissing me off is that siwon the stupid horsie has done nothing except watching his loved one went from one bed to another.. sigh seriously, siwon u need to wake up, dear~
Well, maybe he knew what to do if he had those wild dreams and fantasies about his yesungie all this time XD
NNNOOO!! U CAN’T HAVE BABY YESUNGIE! I ALR GAVE U BABY HAE! His cuteness level is the same so be grateful okay :P
Aww :3 love u so much, baby leann, u have no ideas :D
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