Book Writing Prompt #1 - Seven Deadly Sins Part 1

Aug 10, 2010 19:55

Hello and welcome to "Guess That SIN!" the amazing new game show that has people on the edge of their seats ready to see what can please them of their insatiable hunger!  This game as befitting it's nature of the topics is rated adult for references to some things that would hurt your wittle ears.

(A/N:  I tried my best to write fiction that would represent a character (or future ones) and keep it in the SDS prompt.  What I would like for you the reader is to tell me what sin was best represented in each cut.  In a day or two I will list my answers or rather the sad attempts at it)


She was everything I ever wanted. Golden hair that rivaled the sun and hazel eyes that changed colors with her emotions. Soft pink lips and a generous body. Seeing her like that all sweaty and breathing heavy from long periods of skate boarding with her friends makes me swallow and turn away.

She's so innocent compared to everyone else I've ever seen. Not knowing her place in the grand scheme of things, how the more see awakens the more the ripples spread. I know that when that happens, I'll leave the watching from afar a distant memory.

I could barely contain myself from making my appearance to her right then and there when she got caught in a game of cat and mouse with some monster named Tsuna Ito. My nails pierced my palm right before I tossed the chair away from me in a hissy fit. I wanted to add himself to his tally count.


How I love the coppery taste of blood perhaps too much. I am always trying to find new ways to prolong the pain of those who bore me. After the night of relief from a sudden pain that has been spreading throughout my body since the chains appeared a few weeks ago, I just had to repay the local members of the world's oldest occupation. Their 'screams' as I had my way with them (after the villagers insulted me of course) followed by the icing on the cake of spreading my version of love.

That would have been enough but I heard someone talk to themself and I had to finish the job. The second she fell I flipped her over and prepared myself to end her miserable life. I was not expecting HER. I also didn't like the look of absolute terror on her face as she looked up at me. Something came over me then and I offered her a way up. We talked and I was tempted to clean away the blood from her face but decided to merely brush it away. The very second she said her name, she simply disappeared.

Any guesses so far?


Once upon a time there was the noble family known as Asaru and they were very bad for they were withholding various well needed materials from the surrounding towns and cities with the chief among them being food of all types.

Everyday the family would eat until their stomachs were about to burst in their patios and courtyard where the public could see them induge in their sin. Naturally this inspired the villagers to strike back but each time decided against it. It took a stranger to their county to start the downward spiral.

“Come and fight your oppressors!” He said with a smile. “Free yourself from your bonds.”

Soon after the battle began however, the man was nowhere to be seen. Near the ending when the last few remaining guards were whining about their injuries and the Noble father takes the lives of his clan the man appeared smiling all the while.

“It was you! You started this!” He said in a shaky voice.

The man nods solemnly. “I did indeed, however I am not the one who killed my family in cold blood. That is the fault of your humanity.”

And with that said, the mysterious young man blunged his dagger straight into the noble's heart.

The Noble house of Asaru fell due to the orchastrations of one man. Thankfully a wandering gypsy heard of him and cast a spell cursing him with a death like sleep until his owner would awaken him.

...When commented in the local newspaper, the gypsy's descendant, a Kito Laiko confirms that he is still in lala land.


The Asago's were always after more. More power, more wealth, and most definitely more status and none more so then Yumi. She lived and breathed for the chance to gain more than was rightfully hers. She dated non-stop in search of bigger fish to fry and didn't stop until her family went bankrupt. For once in her life she was completely lost and had a many expensive trinkets around the house. She watched it all being sold with a blank face since she was planning on how to start back her little 'empire'.

She began sneaking into houses after observing it for a day or so and stole everything she could possibly carry. Selling them in another state (since she was near the state line now) was all well and good until she got caught up with another robbery.

Needless to say her rival escaped and she is in jail for many years.

More to come after this break!

(A/N Honestly tell me how it is.   I'll change it later.   I'll continue this in my next post)

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