Fic: Goes Off Like A Gun (Supernatural; Dean/Castiel; PG-13)

[misachan]

Title: Goes Off Like A Gun
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Bloody injuries, Dean's filthy mouth
Spoilers: S5ish
Word Count: 1266
Prompt: From this comment_fic prompt: “my blood is singing with your voice, I want to pour it out” -Florence + the Machine, “Howl”
Summary: The hunt's gone bad and Castiel's out of options

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

The picture this painted in my mind is unerasable!

[hotforangels]

I love the way that you right. It's just so beautiful. There were several lines in this that I had to go back and read twice, because they just hit me so hard:

He's never known any creature who hated being saved more than Dean Winchester.

He doesn't know what it says about him that he's less afraid of falling than of Dean dying for even one moment.

He doesn't know if this is Dean's heartbeat he's feeling or his own. He's not sure he can even draw that distinction anymore.

[hotforangels]

*write....jeez. (it's late)

[dark_cygnet]

I think this is one of my favorites of yours, so like Cas to do whatever it takes to save Dean, and and the imagery that comes through with your lines. Three of them stand out for me:

He's never known any creature who hated being saved more than Dean Winchester.

He doesn't know what it says about him that he's less afraid of falling than of Dean dying for even one moment.

He doesn't know if this is Dean's heartbeat he's feeling or his own. He's not sure he can even draw that distinction anymore.

If these don't sum up Dean and Cas' relationship, then I don't know what does. Now I want to see what happens when Dean takes Cas back to the motel, hee. Beatiful job, thank you for sharing it with us.

[morganoconner]

Back to sitting here with hearts in my eyes, like you always seem to manage to get me to do when you write about these boys.

Oh, Cas.

♥

[ellethill]

Gorgeous. I so love the way you write them.