GAAH
so i'm reconfiguring my "why vassar" essay to become my "why penn" thing, and I'm finding mistakes!!! and I already sent it into vassar!!!!
1. i used "breathtaking" twice within two sentences. ew! they're going to think i have no vocabulary or something.
2. I wrote "I saw of the campus newspapers..." because before it had been "i learned of" and then I changed it to "saw" but I didn't take out the of...
gaaaahhhh what's wrong with me? I do counterpoint! I don't DO things like this! aaaah
1. i used "breathtaking" twice within two sentences. ew! they're going to think i have no vocabulary or something.
2. I wrote "I saw of the campus newspapers..." because before it had been "i learned of" and then I changed it to "saw" but I didn't take out the of...
gaaaahhhh what's wrong with me? I do counterpoint! I don't DO things like this! aaaah