Prompt 33- Spirit

[nicluv1787]

Title: Love at First Slap

Author: Nicluv1787
Rating: K

Genre: Romance, Introspective

CU/AU: CU

Prompt: Spirit

Characters: Miroku & Sango

Words:  358

Summary: Miroku’s progression of feelings for Sango

Comments

[dechanter]

Aw, the ending was really sweet :)
I think this is a good insight on Miroku's psyche. At times it would seem he was an eager masochist for all the bumps and bruises he received from his wandering hand.

[nicluv1787]

Thank you.

Lol, he is a masochist he just doesn't want to admit it. :p

[eggplantlady]

Nice look into the change in Miroku's behavior after he met Sango and started to fall for her. It's easy to see him just as a playboy, but she really does bring out the best in him (well, given enough time, at least).

[nicluv1787]

I agree. (lol)

[landofthekwt]

Great evolution of their relationship as shown by sexual advances by Miroku and the response from Sango.She hits him and yet he coming back for more because he comes to care for her and eventually loves her/

[nicluv1787]

Exactly. Thanks.

[psyco_chick32]

I really enjoyed Miroku's thoughts about her slap - he's been slapped enough to judge a woman based on it ^_^

His change throughout this was fabulous; well done!

[nicluv1787]

LOL. Exactly. He's like a conisuer of the slap,he can distinguise the the subtle undertones in a woman's slap.

Thank you very much.