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Prompt #33: Spirit

Jun 02, 2010 23:03

Title: Enveloped
Author: starzki
Rating: K+
Genre: Drama/Comfort
Word Count: 496
Universe: Canon
Summary: In the final battle with Naraku, when all hope seemed lost, they turned to each other.

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( She pressed her face into his robes and felt enveloped by him. )

#33 - spirit, winner, author: starzki, length - drabble

Comments 6

sonjajade June 3 2010, 04:27:16 UTC

This is so beautiful!!

dechanter June 3 2010, 18:33:33 UTC

That was very lovely, the imagery was amazing, too.

nicluv1787 June 5 2010, 17:43:33 UTC

Absolutely beautiful, the imagery was gorgeous, you weaved a very touching scene.

I'd also like to add, that is one of my favorite scenes of the two of them, from the manga.

eggplantlady June 6 2010, 02:33:48 UTC

This is such a lovely exploration of that scene... you've really made it palpable how, in such a dreadful moment in time, they could overcome despair and sorrow and give themselves over to love and even (cautiously) hope. Wonderful!

landofthekwt June 6 2010, 13:35:36 UTC

Very nice