Prologue...?

[mirrankei]

I am having the worst trouble submitting this.

This was written in a fit of "I can't finish any of my fanfics arrrrrgh", which for some reason had the logical conclusion of "I should start a new one!" ..."At three in the morning!" So have an angsty Torchwood AU that might lead to a much longer fanfic someday (which will not be as angsty).

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[nancybrown]

I liked this. Definite timey-wimey possibilities, and I love the notion that it's Suzie's choice that will defeat the Trickster. She's the perfect character for his machinations, and the thought that the Suzie we saw in canon would be a product of her own choice to stand against him adds interesting layers to her character.

(I do think you ought to name her and the rest in the characters field. There's not much good Suzie fic out there, and it may get you more readers.)

[mirrankei]

I'm so glad you like it! And I'm so glad you can tell it's the Trickster without me spelling it out.

Suzie... probably isn't quite as important as I've made her out to be here, but you never know, she might steal the spotlight once I start the actual fic.

(Thank you for the advice, I think I will take you up on it.)