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miri91

Work with Me

Dec 30, 2010 22:22

Title: Work with Me
Pairings: Yoochun/fc
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There’s just so many times you say no. Then you just...cave.
A/N: Oneshot of het!smut, blame my muse at 1.00 in the morning~

Down hallways she ran, past numerous rooms with numbers labeled, numbers flying by her. She was scared, scared out of her mind, scared out of her wits ( Read more... )

Comments 18

onthethruway01 December 31 2010, 04:32:05 UTC

I love het and this was really good. Thank you.

miri91 January 1 2011, 00:27:39 UTC

*bows* hehe i'm glad you liked it! ty for commenting!

onthethruway01 January 1 2011, 00:44:14 UTC

I write het all the time. Keep up the good work.

miri91 January 1 2011, 05:32:15 UTC

*o* ooh~ then i shall come by and read some of your works sometime kkk~

i will! komawoyo! hwaiting~

jae_camwhore December 31 2010, 22:17:03 UTC

uh... Been ages since I read any het, especially one that was so hot. Girl, you write good het, loved it. <3 Ow and happy new year...only 45 minutes more for me and it will be 2011. :)

miri91 January 1 2011, 00:16:56 UTC

HAPPY NEW YEARRRR 8D
*hugs you* hehe thanks! my first het smut....it just popped out of nowhere haha but i'm glad you like it! *touched* <333

izanamiwiles January 1 2011, 21:22:05 UTC

This was..........HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT AS HELL!!
I think I already read it Three times *crazy me*! But really like the way she's torn between the two feelings, and Yoochun has just the right balance between pushing her over the edge but knowing how to make sure she's not hurt....Yeah I definitely love this!
(and um totally random, but just to make you laugh: It took me almost 45min to an hour to figure out what het meant! XDDDDDDD....Yes I'm slow! HAHAHAHA When I figured it out I laughed at myself for being so dumb! ^^)
But anyway, one question *cause I'm curious* why Yoochun? I mean I know he's always the greasy one, but I was just wondering. *hehehehe*
OOH and before I go can I be even more noisy? *hides behind pillow*....who's your muse? *hides again before running out the door* ...I know I know I'm too curious, I'll go now. ^^,
THANK YOU FOR THIS FOR YOUR ALWAYS AMAZING WORK and pleasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee write moooooooooooooooooooooooore!
Love ya < ( ... )

miri91 January 2 2011, 02:57:41 UTC

haha whoot! glad you liked it milie ah! yc is a selfish bastard who doesnt care what his coordinator thinks..but at the very end of course his caring part does come out...after he pratically forces the poor girl ( ... )

kimcheesushi January 2 2011, 08:10:33 UTC

ooohhh.. greasy chun found his target. :D

OMG. eat her whole :D
lolll.. this is getting interesting XD
p.s. you're dirtying my mind atm. bwahahahahha. i blame you! :P okay fine. i blame changmin. and then YOU!

LMAO CHUNNIE *slaps the boy wif embarrassment* XD

lol. idk why but reading yoochun's name made me grin :P

OMG. so greasy. bwahahahahahhaha
*reads*

and LOL she rememberd humans could breather thru noses. i'll remember that for futre reference *winks*

sry... he hates socks? o.O lol. reminds me of the mtvk talk abt socks.

wow. he's so mean :P

and all that in 5 mins? o.O

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you've dirtified me XD

btw.. wats het? O.O
and it was omg. XDXDXD >///

miri91 January 3 2011, 01:54:30 UTC

*chuckles* always first blame cm....then blame me...cuz i was first corrupted by cm and the guys too hehe

8'''D hehe i love your commentin, just makes me laugh. and yup, supposedly yc loves walkin around even in winter in just flip flops. and how did you know that bit about 'i hate socks' i got from the mtvk thing? ;D

ermm ^^* all that in five minutes *bright red*

ehehe guilty as declared *blushes*

het= hetero verse aka male character/ female character

glad you liked it bb!

kimcheesushi January 4 2011, 01:53:42 UTC

LMAO. the day DBSK was created.. girls' innocence were lost:P
tho back then they were adorable. hahaha..

and oh yeah.. i remember i saw that somewhere.. and in the pic by.. mr egg i think? he was wearing flipflops :] i cant do that cuz even wearing boots my toes still get cold but anywayy...

your fics are addicting :P

miri91 January 4 2011, 03:01:46 UTC

haha right, right! xD

yup, mr. egg.....crazy guy didnt even get frostbite, impressive

o/////o eep. ty!

captainmarvel January 16 2011, 01:44:59 UTC

late comment but all I have to say is if Yoochun only had 15 minutes till he had to go on stage and was able to finish with 10 minutes to spare that means he's a 5 minute man...SHAME!

:D
Off to read part 2.
Thank You ♥

miri91 January 16 2011, 03:27:17 UTC

*had to re-read that twice to get the meaning* OHHH MY GOD I HAD NO IDEA WHAT THAT IMPLIED *BURSTS OUT LAUGHING AT YOUR 'SHAME'!* b-b-but...but he would've lasted more...it was just all the pent up sexual energy and frustration building up over time.....wait, why on earth am i explaining on his behalf??

hehe *hugs you* thank you for your comment! it brought a smile to my face hee 0^^0