WE PARDON TO THE EXTENT THAT WE LOVE - oneshot!

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Title: WE PARDON TO THE EXTENT THAT WE LOVE
Author: mirazuki_yuuri
Pairing/Subject: YamaRyu, OkaChii, TakaBu, HikaDai, InooJima, mentioned! OkaMori (friendship)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: slight angst, attempted (but failed!) fluff, some crack
Summary: They forget the most important fact.
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys...or their ass..(okay,maybe I'm plotting something

Comments

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Secretly ship them?? lol why it had to be a secret??

XDDYamaryuu is just too adorable nothing can beat Chiitaro though

Ummm..no promises hahaha
Have some ideas in mind but too lazy to work on any of it..

Anyway, thanks for reading n commenting Sami!! ILU!! ♥♥♥

[le_chocolats]

WAHOOOOO!!!
Aside with chinen, I do love seeing ryutaro together with yamada XDDDD And this is sweeeeeeet, Al!!!! And i don't know why, the Okachii you wrote had me start to fall for this pairing too XDDDD

“Don’t. You’re ugly enough without those puffy eyes.” <---- seriously ryutaro, this is what you really have to say to your boyfriend? =.='''''

But I salute yamada on this, despite being like Chinen, go all jealous, he believes his boyfriend TT.TT

Love this, Al XDDD

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Welcome to Okachii shipper club, Choco!! XDD This pairing is soooo under-appreciated :(

hahahaha he's an insolent brat. Somehow, I think he could possibly had said something like that to Yamada in real life XD

It's so unlike the all possessive Yamada actually.I planned to make a jealous Yamada but then I realized it would drag the story to no end so I just stick to I-believe-my-boyfriend Yamada.

And I love u, Choco!!

Thanks for reading n commenting!! ♥♥♥

[le_chocolats]

write more okachii, al, so you can poison me more into their world XDDDD

Ah, sometimes when I wrote a fic, it happened to me too TT.TT They went totally different from what I had in mind first T.T

I LOVE YOU TOO, AL XDDDD And anytime XDDDD

[mirazuki_yuuri]

hahaha I will!! cos I need more friends to flail over okachii XDD

that's the hardest part when writing.. that's why I have a bunch of half-written story in my laptop >_<

♥♥♥♥♥

[ichigocherry]

Here's my spot!

[ichigocherry]

Structured criticism coming!
Okay, there's not much though. I don't even think it's much I'f a critic. Hahahha!!

When reading, I could imagine some parts just being there but still completing the story. I don't know, it's my opinion. But I'm still glad you inserted more than the important points of the story cause it made it more enjoyable to read. :-D

/flails at daiki ♥
Ahahaha bias people are biased.

Mum traded my phone with her iPhone. I miss my old phone. I don't think you guys would ever see the old way I text cause it's too hard doing that now I'm using this freaking thing. :(

So new phone = less flailing of fics and / bullying Al
Hahaha!

[mirazuki_yuuri]

hahaha go on
I need some constructive critics to improve n there's no one else can critic me as 'constructive' as u do XD

some parts just being there but still completing the story
such as?? I'm dying to know >_<

lol *shoved Daiki into Rei's arms*

Oh poor Rei *pats ur head*
First time I heard someone called iPhone as 'this freaking thing' hahaha u never fail to impress me..

less bullying Al = Al happy!!
mwahahaha

aaaanyway, thanks for reading n commenting REI ♥♥♥

[ichigocherry]

nope, too lazy. :p hahahhaah I suck in constructive comments. :p

/lets you die/
kidding. :P
hmm... I'm not sure. but I guess, the YamaRyuu call can stand alone as a different story, mentioning the OkaChii fight of corz cuz that's one of the reason Yama called anyways.

another part is the necklace thing. But of course, by merging these two plots you did a great job! BD

/both almost falls, both blushed deeply, both glared Al at the same time/
really? oh yeah.... That's the first time I heard someone saying that too. :P HAHAHAHHA I'm your friend, I should be weird. Sigh. The things you became from the works that are called Friendship. HHAHAHAH. but seriously. This thing is not much. its a used 3GS iPhone that mum bought from her friend. It's big and bulky in compare with my old phone, even though my ex phone is almost 4 yrs old now...
hey! I took great care of my old phone!

Noooo. Less bullying = Al lonely! xD

you're always welcome Al ♥ p/s: followed you on twitter. xD

[kumonoaakoi]

Awe so cute

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Awww thanks!! - for reading n commenting - XDD

[haruki_04]

i love yamaryuu's phone conversation part <333

oh and this part,

“A necklace.” All heads turn to the voice. “A custom made necklace.”
“Yuya, that’s the brightest thing you’ve said today,” Yabu-kun adds before pouncing onto his brunette boyfriend.

LOLLL XDD

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Really? I thought it's kinda boring actually.. XD

hahahaha u r the only one that like that part..
the out-of-sudden-I'm-cool Takaki..
the takabu pair is sooo adorable, aren't they??

thanks for reading n commenting dear <3

[haruki_04]

it's not boring for me, i like the way they talking to each other like that :D

exactly! out-of-sudden-I'm-cool Takaki, LOLLL XDDD
yeap, they are!

you're very welcome~