i think the story development is solid and the scenes you paint are very vivid. and everyone relates to seduction in some way, right? so, you're grabbing empathy for laura. good stuff! :)
i don't believe there are any late starts... more like prolonged beginnings. so, you want to be a doctor? that's incredibly noble! :) what kind of doctor? i'm just full of questions for you, huh? sorry if they're prodding...
good and bad are completely subjective judgments. the power of love pulls us out of ourselves to see through the other's eyes. sometimes the most personal actions are impersonal... life is a mixed bag as are relationships, no?
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i think the story development is solid and the scenes you paint are very vivid. and everyone relates to seduction in some way, right? so, you're grabbing empathy for laura. good stuff! :)
what are you studying?
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In a relationship, rarely is one all good or all bad, even if his or her ultimate actions seem to suggest otherwise.
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As for your question, I'm a first year medical student (I got off to a late start).
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good and bad are completely subjective judgments. the power of love pulls us out of ourselves to see through the other's eyes. sometimes the most personal actions are impersonal... life is a mixed bag as are relationships, no?
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My mother is a Pediatrician and my little brother is going to be a Radiologist.
I sort of had academic ADD and hung out in undergraduate and graduate courses for ten years or so...
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