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My first Miracle fic! Yay

Mar 03, 2007 04:49

Title: Worried
Author: charlie_unicorn
Rating: M
Pairing: Mac/Johnson
Summary: Mac worried about Johnson during the infamous "Herbies" drill.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.

Author’s Note: Hey guys, this is my first shot at a Miracle fic, as well as my first shot at slash. I intended to write a brief, fluffy one-shot, yet somehow it turned into ( Read more... )

Comments 5

scrawl42 March 3 2007, 17:52:28 UTC

I like the last part. :D Very good for a first attempt at slash!

rebel______yell March 3 2007, 17:55:04 UTC

I loved it!!! I really think you should make this into a story! It would be great! :)

charlie_unicorn March 4 2007, 21:15:39 UTC

Yeah I'm not sure if I'll make it into a story or not, but I'll definitely think about it. Thanks!

mentalhygiene March 4 2007, 03:50:09 UTC

For a first try, this is very good. :) There's a nice sense of intimacy (more than the physical sense) between the two of them, and camraderie. Well done. :) (and rather hot, too).

charlie_unicorn March 4 2007, 05:05:08 UTC

Thanks guys! I appreciate it :)