Interlude - A Moment Without End

Nov 23, 2010 04:44

This continues from part 1 and part 2

Title: Interlude - A Moment Without End
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun or Kyuchul, they can't tell either
Length: 1465
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG13
Summary: Heechul keeps his distance, suddenly. Kyuhyun wants to know why.

Please read and comment and let me know what you think!

Before Kyuhyun can begin to decipher what the hell that means )

pairing: heechul/kyuhyun

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chandatika November 23 2010, 10:43:07 UTC
Wow
it's just wow
you hurt me here.
i don't even expect the angst.
but i love it.
keep up the good work btw :)

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velvetpen November 23 2010, 11:40:49 UTC
Awww, I'm sorry, but I'm glad you liked it and more is coming. :)

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velvetpen November 23 2010, 11:40:20 UTC
Awww, i'm sorry! But I'm glad you liked it and thank you for your comment. And don't worry, they will make up. *smiles*

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ext_313544 November 23 2010, 12:08:25 UTC
thanks for writing this! kyuhyun and heechul are 2/3 of my favourite!

=)

you're a pretty good writer~

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velvetpen November 23 2010, 12:39:37 UTC
i have a huge kyuhyun and heechul bias, hee, glad you liked it and thanks for your compliment

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convicted_eyes November 23 2010, 13:01:18 UTC
GIHEIHEPHETHJHETJ
I just read the other two like...20 minutes ago or something!
THIS MADE ME WANT TO CRY!!
Silly Heechul!! I wish I could slap some sense into that pretty man!!
You wrote this, like the others, so prettily and well!
Can't wait for more <3

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velvetpen November 23 2010, 13:08:52 UTC
Oh he's in big trouble when Kyuhyun finds out/figures out what the heck is going on. Heechul's being sooooo stupid, umg! But yay thank you, glad you liked it :)

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lady_hanaka November 23 2010, 16:50:13 UTC
Oh Heechul...*sighs* can't you and Kyuhyun just get to humping like bunnies now and save us all the trouble of angst? Of course not, but that's fine, because I rather love angst. A lot. So please, continue. XD

Oh, and welcome to the club of people who are unable to simply write smut without adding on an entire series. My ability to write oneshots fails. T_T

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velvetpen November 23 2010, 20:22:45 UTC
I'm blaming the whole - the muses are eating my brain - for the inability to write a simple smutty scene. It's all their fault. And they are both kinda breaking my heart right now, I cried while I was writing. Silly me. Thanks for the comment and the welcome and the everything. Ps, I wrote you a comment, I started reading blood brothers yesterday. Oh my *thunk*

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lady_hanaka November 23 2010, 20:33:47 UTC
Hahaha. I saw. :D I hope you enjoy it.

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