Comments | miracle_____

lhjlove in miracle______

Nov 20, 2010 02:27

title: moments
pairing: hyukjae/donghae
rating: pg-13, 791 words.
Everyone has those moments.

( Hyukjae freezes up, and he’s pretty sure his heart stops. )

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lhjlove November 20 2010, 22:41:43 UTC

thank you! :D

pseudo_shigure November 20 2010, 07:51:28 UTC

Definitely not terrible :)
Is there more to it? Though it's a good one shot too ^^

lhjlove November 20 2010, 22:42:37 UTC

idek, i just never thought i was that great at writing fics. this is it, though, just a short piece that i wrote to start out. thanks, though! <3

6purplegiraffes November 20 2010, 07:56:29 UTC

i honestly think this is cute. sooo adorable!

lhjlove November 20 2010, 22:43:20 UTC

thanks! ^___^

lovetails November 20 2010, 08:56:45 UTC

aww this is not terrible at all, its good
its really cute. me like cute first love stories XD

lhjlove November 20 2010, 22:43:34 UTC

aw, thanks so much. ;_;

eiarim November 20 2010, 10:08:28 UTC

Cute~!