The World Has It's Shine (something to hold onto) 19

[minus_four]

Title: The World Has It's Shine (something to hold onto) - 19
Author: minus_four
Rating: R (language)
Pairing: Gabilliam
POV: 3rd
Summary: Around 21 months. Gabe had that same kind of manner to him as when they were at the baby store and one of the moms around was about to go for the same little shirt as Gabe was which just happened to be the last one;

Comments

[emmyatthedisco]

I'm a horrible person, but i just want her to go away and leave them in peace. Gabe and William are doing a fine job on there own, and.... poor Gabe's gonna go and get all insecure again. :(

I love how Riley ran right over to Gabe, all freaked out and stuff and Gabe's all caring... I just want their little family back!

Sorry, you caught me at an emotional moment... Amazing job, bb. This story is... unbelievably awesome in every way.

[minus_four]

Nah bb, you're not. Even I don't want her around and I put her there lol. Yes, Gabe is :(

haha Riley's awesome being all DNW THIS WOMAN lol. Papi!Gabe is love also.

You okay bb? ily. Thank you so so much because I thought this was a bit crap and fillerish tbh :/ so I really appreciate it :)

<3!

[emmyatthedisco]

are they going to have a mini fight then hot make up sex? cause i could totally deal with that... hehe

papi!gabe has made me fall in love with him all over again.

Yeah, I'm fine, i'm just being all... *fails*
I liked it a lot bb, <3 ily2

[minus_four]

um... I doubt it. Ooh, I kinda want angry!sex though. Maybe a 'deleted scene' :P though there may be a sequel to the epic porn lost chapter sometime so maybe I just save up ma porniness ;)

me too

aww. *huggles*
yay, I'm really glad

[halighanawfulie]

crap...

I really like how you describe Riley's reactions to people and things.

[minus_four]

yeah... sorry?

yay, thanks! <33

[minus_four]

haha becky ily so hard. This was exactly the reaction I was expecting/hoping for. MAYBE SHE WILL STAY AROUND FOR EVAH lol or not...

oh bb, dnw you to get worked up/upset though (although idk what the point was of bringing her in otherwise :P). This don't work like that.

haha I liked that too. And he so would if he wanted the perfect shirt for riley. oh papi!gabe.

Yay, tysm bb, I thought it was sucky tbh lol. ily and YES SHE MUST DIEEEEEE.

<3

[12169]

I'm sorry, but she needs to go. Here are some ways in which you can do this:
-heart attack in her sleep
-trips on one of Riley's toys and falls onto a piece of furniture, snapping her neck
-Gabe takes a machine gun to the bitch
-food poising. Mostly likely done by, but not limited to, Gabe

KILL THE BITCH. Seriously. Oh my god. Riley does not need a mom, he has two dads. Two wonderful dads that love him and she's just a stupid bitch. I am actually really worked up over this for some reason. It's upsetting me so much. She just doesn't get to do that. She's not allowed to just waltz into their lives and try to fit in. Things don't work like that, someone needs to set her straight. Ugh. I hate this bitch.

that conveyed my feelings perfectly.

i don't think i've ever commented you before but i just had to get that out there. i'm a longtime lurker though, i love both your stories. can't wait for the next chapter of either one.

[minus_four]

haha yes ourgossip_lips did have a pretty great reaction there :)

nope lol, but thanks for commenting now and it makes me really happy you lurk/love my stories. Thanks! <3

[grandnature04]

In the words of Riley, "No, no NO!!!!!!"
She is totally not allowed to be his mom!
She fucking chose to leave him with William almost two years ago!
It's like when you give a child up for adoption... You don't get the chance to contact them until they're 18.
Ugh. Not cool Meghan.
Not cool.
Just let them be a happy family!
Gah!

[minus_four]

haha yeah! I mean no!
she shouldn't be, I totes agree.
and yes she fucking did!
It should be like that but I don't think it was all official... sigh.
idk how happy they're gonna be for a little while tbh...

Thanks for commenting! <3

[prettyodd_me]

Aw, you described all their reactions so perfectly and naturally. Gabe being hesitant and wary of her, William feeling a little awkward talking to him about her-like he expects/knows he wont be happy with the situation... Riley being clingy and unsure.

Meghan... I agree with everyone else, she has to go lol.
Great little intro to Meghan.
Oh, and protective Gabe is so sweet.

[minus_four]

Yay, thanks awesome ty.

Protective Gabe is my favorite :)

Thanks so much! <3