Breaking Habits (you don't want to know) 13

Jul 13, 2008 22:24

Title: Breaking Habits (you don't want to know) - 13
Author: minus_four
Rating: Hard R (language, content)
Pairing: William Beckett/Ryan Ross and William/Gabe Saporta
POV: 3rd
Summary: William's fighting his demons in rehab. All too familiar with the path of self destruction drugs and alcohol can lead to, Ryan visits him (like, a lot). And then Gabe shows up ( Read more... )

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mirrorscrack July 14 2008, 02:27:12 UTC
BUT....BUT....BUT...

talk about a cliffhanger, eh?

you break my heart daily, but i love this. by far the most emotionally charged chapter. and GOOD ON YOU SISKY for putting gabe in his place. how could he think it was ok to shut will down so hard after all this. after all the effort! gah, my heart hurts

ETA: I KEEP READING IT AND FREAKING OUT OVER AND OVER AGAIN

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minus_four July 14 2008, 03:05:40 UTC
I KNOW BB. I KNOW.

told ya. If I'm considering not having a cliffie for other people's sake, you know it's insane 'cause I loves me a cliffhanger.

aw bb, dnw break you :( but love! Yeah, like everything's ramped up to this, even all the ryan stuff because else gabe couldn't react the way he did and bilvy wouldn't have - and omg dominoes. I said gabe was being an arse lol. And my heart hurts b/c yours does. AND BILVY MIGHT BE DEAD. HE MIGHT BE. YOU DON'T KNOW. ahem. sorry.

Ahahaha I love your edit bb (I'm doin it too :P) but not as much as I love you, and this comment. ty <3

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emmyatthedisco July 14 2008, 02:36:02 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

No, i refuse. No. No. No.

No Gabe couldn't be that heartless, No Bill can not be hurt or using again, No sisky can't kill Gabe.
MOST OF ALL,

NO! You can not stop there!
that's just cruel man,

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minus_four July 14 2008, 03:08:03 UTC
*hides*

Keep saying no and maybe he'll be fine :P

I wish I could agree with all those things...

I know, I know. Sorry. ily?

Thanks bb <3

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emmyatthedisco July 14 2008, 03:12:50 UTC
i forgot to mention in my fit of no that it was actually really nice... I mean, strong emotion which i love.

you are forgiven because your you bb.
ILY!

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minus_four July 14 2008, 03:17:39 UTC
aww, thanks. I wanted it to be kinda ~intense lol. ty for teh love :)

yay
ILY!

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smilehostage July 14 2008, 02:41:59 UTC
SOPH BB
I'M IN FUCKING TEARS.

OMG BILL.

so many things. Gabe pushing Bill away because he knows he'd break if Bill was lying, if Bill used him. Bill having to get the fuck out of there because the one person he was hoping would save him, would help him can't. Gabe freaking the fuck out when Bill bolts. Sisky tearing Gabe a new one for being a silly fuck and not watching Bill. Sisky with two phones wandering the city looking for Bill. finding the alcohol and then Bill.

and this:
Bill Beckett, a fucking lyricist, drowning in words and unable to string them together properly. Cue the slow, mocking applause.
that, bb. this whole thing, was fucking perfect. the way you got in their heads, the way they all reacted, in such a human way, fuck. ily. ♥

[and LOL CLAN ICON]

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minus_four July 14 2008, 03:12:03 UTC
See, god I feel so bad now for making everyone cry and killing bilvy jk, jk. but I do feel bad *hugsyourealtight*

I love the way you summarise all the best things about my fic. really love it.
And ngl, like my favorite line(s) fer sure. so tyty bb.
ohhhh man thanks so much, because that is all of what I want, humanity and realism. And perfect *eyeroll*

[HAHA IKR? SO PRETTY]

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minus_four July 14 2008, 03:15:03 UTC
oh bb *hug* no cry :( I feel bad

He was trying to make pasta pie and then he got sleepy. And he didn't do anything. Okay bb?

Clan <3

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wtfxslutface July 14 2008, 03:29:20 UTC
OMFG you left it THERE!?!?!?!
That whole scene just...killed
Cannot even form coherent sentances
you've goo-ified my brain
how dare you?! jk
no srsly
This fic has won my heart
Update ASAP!!!!

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minus_four July 14 2008, 11:12:40 UTC
Don't worry, I feel really evil :/
Wow, thanks so much. Wonderful comment :)

<3

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