The World Has It's Shine (something to hold onto) 12

May 19, 2008 23:05

Title: The World Has It's Shine (something to hold onto) - part 12
Author: minus_four
Rating: R overall
Pairing: Gabilliam
POV: 3rd
Summary: Around 16 months. He looked so tiny on the mattress so much bigger than his crib at home, William thought as his eyes traveled over his son, taking in everything from his half-closed eyes; looking just like they did ( Read more... )

gabilliam, riley

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stronger_now_x May 19 2008, 23:10:57 UTC
Ohhhh shiiizzzz. I absolutely love this story and I'm soo happy Riley's okay, but I'm not too sure about this Gabe-calling-William's-parents-without-William-knowing thing. :|

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stronger_now_x May 19 2008, 23:11:16 UTC
FC?! :DDD

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:17:58 UTC
Yes! :DDD

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:17:33 UTC
Yay! I love that you love it :D
and yeah... great idea Gabe... :/

Thanks so much! <3

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:21:34 UTC
AHAHAHA YOUR REACTIONS GET EVER BETTERER EVERY TIME!

Ahem. But really I could've just written that instead of a long ass chapter and gotten everyone to use their imaginations. /random.

Also, your icon is perfect for Gabe at the end. Like so-tired-wtf-Idek. Ha. Yay!

Thank you so much (immediately after finishing this chapter I was like 'this is the worst chapter ever' for no reason in particular so your comment made me very happy even though I couldn't reply till now)

<333!

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minus_four May 20 2008, 22:28:51 UTC
Betterer lol, yes I is speshul ;)

Is cool, I just didn't like this one too much for some reason. Don't mind me, I'm strange lol. BUT YOU JUST SAID IT (excuse me, strange like I said lol). eeee thumbs up :)

yes it is caught off guard - PURE GABANTI and I love it too <3

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do_or_die621 May 19 2008, 23:21:48 UTC
*headdesk*

WHAT.
WHATWHATWHAT. *explodes*
NO WAY, GABRIEL. NO. FUCKING. WAY.

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:22:35 UTC
*headdesk* with you.

Gaaaaaaaaaabriel! wtf? I know.

Thanks dude <3

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do_or_die621 May 20 2008, 19:41:29 UTC
*communal headdesk*

I was trying to be authoritive with fic!Gabe. I might be slightly insane. ._.

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minus_four May 20 2008, 22:32:01 UTC
ahahaha I love it. :D

<3

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stayxwithxme394 May 20 2008, 00:12:45 UTC
Fuck you and your fucking amazing stories. Gah. It's 1 in the morning and I have exam at 8 you evil, evil child. WHY DO YOU DO THESE THINGS TO ME?? And then you go and give Riley MENINGITIS??? AND FORCE GABE TO CALL BECKETT'S PARENTS?? GAH. Okay, I'm going to go to sleep now... *grumbles about stupidly addictive fanfictions that keep her up till stupidness o'clock in the morning*

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:28:34 UTC
AHAHA BEST COMMENT OPENER EVER.

Fuck me ;)

Ha, I've written fic at that time before an exam in the not too distant past lol and YES I HATED MYSELF TOOOOO :P

Yes, I'm evil. No, Gabe is acting beyond my control because he loooooves Bilvy but isn't really thinking too well about it lol

I HOPE THE EXAM WENT WELL BB! :)

Thanks so much <3

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stayxwithxme394 May 20 2008, 15:36:18 UTC
I do try. My comments are usually better when I'm half asleep, cranky and stressed XD After I posted it, I was like 'shit that was kinda rude' but again... too tired to care.

THANKS TO YOU I WAS PRACTICALLY SLEEP WALKING TO SCHOOL AND WAS FORCED TO SPEND £1.35 ON RED BULL. But then I got hyper and ended up crying from laughing hysterically about how fucked I was for that exam. People were looking at me weird. It's not my fault I get the giggles :-/

So again... fuck you for forcing me to spend money... but thank you for forcing me to spend said money on a drunk that gives me the power to giggle.

That probably made no sense... MEH WELL.

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:40:57 UTC
No, I love it. When someone curses in relation to anything I write it's like hey, reaction :D

Heyyy fellow british person! *waves*
Aww, I am sorry about that. Did you have to walk up hills? I've had to hungover and my friend started to push me up it and I just yelled DON'T FUCKING PUSH ME and then cried. SO I CAN RELATE.

Giggling is better than crying though. Hmm? :)

Made sense to me *shrug* <333

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noteto__self May 20 2008, 00:17:24 UTC
algjklajrnlgarkgjla
DD=

/incoherency.

so glad riley's okay.
tbh i was tossing up whether you were gonna call mrs beckett, or pete wentz. =]]

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minus_four May 20 2008, 15:35:17 UTC
hee hee

yeah me too :)
AHAHA yeah hi pete I'd like to reschedule my prostituting and also, I need you to pay this bill. like... yeah. lol :PPP

Thanks <3

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