we'll always have this road trip (1/1)

Mar 22, 2012 17:57

title: we'll always have this road trip (1/1)
pairing: taekey
rating: nc-17
word count: 8368
summary: seoul no longer holds any sentiment for taemin.
note: i'll never understand why my taekey fics are so long.
dedicated to the beautiful mhn77
i was going to write this out and send it to you. but then it became 8k and...lol nope
forever grateful for my bff and ( Read more... )

genre: au!, fandom: shinee, genre: romance, pairing: taekey, type: oneshot, rating: nc-17

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mhn77 March 25 2012, 17:53:02 UTC
Speaking of knowing my taste ODG WOMAN YOUR SMUT YOU MUST BE TRYING TO KILL ME. The way you built up the tension with all the eye contact eye contact sobs and staring, the rimming, him riding Key, him fucking Key, and so so much variety, bathroom, bed, car! You're amazing.

"Circling his tongue around the head, Kibum slowly sucks Taemin into his mouth." I swear my breath hitched! And the knot in my stomach is irl ffffffuuu

“Open your mouth.” Remember what I said on your SMTown JongTae? God and you are in the details. This was a such a nice touch.

"Kibum cocks his head, dark eyes sparkling with wicked intent, his smile slow and predatory." I love you <3

But besides all that I'm having so many Korea feels these days and your fic just played right into those. The way your words just makes image upon image play out like a movie in my head and I'm right back to watching the scenery fly by when I drove from Busan to Seoul. Sure, it was on a bus and a lot less sex was involved but it's a very emotional memory for me.
So, yeah, in many ways I think this became about a lot of other stuff, too :'3

I know how you feel about it, but I can understand people bugging you for a sequel (might have an idea..) cos this was absolutely fucking brilliant, and I just never wanted it to end. But I know your fic folders so :P And if you never do a sequel I can pretend they lived happily ever after *u*

And jfc you had to go and add that Chapman lyrics quote, right when I'm back to finally make this sad comment. I fucking love that song..and here I go again ;A;

I love you so much it's not even funneh. ME RN IRL

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mhn77 March 25 2012, 17:54:36 UTC
Yes, that was me being speechless, believe it or not.

WTF lj has a comment chars limit?? XD Who knew.

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mhn77 March 25 2012, 18:06:24 UTC
This was such a fucking mess, I'm sorry >.< BUT JUST LOOK HOW PERFECT HOW COULD THEY NOT FLUSTER THE SHIT OUT OF MY BRAIN

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mintyfresh1 March 25 2012, 20:23:08 UTC


MIA HOLY FUCKING SHIT

"now it's getting awkward" omg what are you LIKE GIRL GHDJSAGHDJKSAGDHSAJK
you can't make a fitting comment girl WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT COMMENT THEN OMG ME RN:


you just......omg
13 times holy shit here i'm thinking omg i'm so surprised she's not read it yet? she was so excited? and then....13 times
i'm sorry for making you cry TT_TT

omg i kinda fell in love with that beginning? i couldn't take it out no matter what xD
thank you so much omfg mia GETTING ALL EMOTIONAL HERE


haha you would just LOVE if i only wrote taekey WOULDN'T YOU LMFAO :D
every word is for you baby ;;

i've never been to korea omg i forgot you have things relatable aigo i hope it fits
i love that song too omg, i think that song is a nice theme tune for this fic :D
ugh baby c'mere to mamma <3333


thank you so much ghdjshgdjksghsjkal i love you too omg i'm so glad you loved it ;~;

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mhn77 March 26 2012, 23:30:43 UTC
"here i'm thinking omg i'm so surprised she's not read it yet? she was so excited?"
This is why it was getting awkward >"< cos I knew you were thinking that, I mean, of course! I would be thinking that :3

And omg nu don't you get all emotional cos I'm all emotional and then we'll all be all emotional and there just won't be enough tissues or cookies in the world for that!!
Hey, and don't be sorry for making me cry. It's not like every tear is necessarily a bad one like that, and it's not like you did something mean, in fact all you did was something amazing <333 I'll happily accept any tears that may follow such awesome writing. I love when writers can touch me like that and reach that far into me.

"every word is for you baby ;;" ohmagaaaaaawdddd ;~~~~~~; I kinda thought you maybe just wrote panda later, to be nice to me, dedicated it to me cos I've been bugging you for KeyTae :3
Okay but seriously, then it really is scary how well you know my taste. Do I really talk that much about it? lol But the whole time I was, like, "omg this is soooo me!", "THEY BOTH TOP ;A;", "this is so good omg!!!", "I love when he does/says that :3", "yesssss ;A;", "ahgsdghjasdjghjaghdhjgfjf fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu *q*", "nuuuu /sobbing forever" ALL THE TIME.

lol and yes, it fit fine maybe except the part about being able to be out of Seoul in fifteen mins! XD Unless he already lived on the outskirts lol But no, like I said, you took me back, not made me wonder what the hell you were going on about so it was great :3

This morning I stayed in bed for two hours thinking about my rec list for real cos this really made me wanna do it! Of course I didn't get around to it cos..well, I'm me! But it will happen, and this will be the first one on there <3

YES PLEASE DO KEYTAE ONLY \o/

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