we'll always have this road trip (1/1)
title: we'll always have this road trip (1/1)
pairing: taekey
rating: nc-17
word count: 8368
summary: seoul no longer holds any sentiment for taemin.
note: i'll never understand why my taekey fics are so long.
dedicated to the beautiful mhn77
i was going to write this out and send it to you. but then it became 8k and...lol nope
forever grateful for my bff and ( Read more... )
pairing: taekey
rating: nc-17
word count: 8368
summary: seoul no longer holds any sentiment for taemin.
note: i'll never understand why my taekey fics are so long.
dedicated to the beautiful mhn77
i was going to write this out and send it to you. but then it became 8k and...lol nope
forever grateful for my bff and ( Read more... )
But tbh I think you've gone and done it. Seriously. I've been wrestling with what to say ever since I first read it, and by now it's getting awkward when I see you so... But I am speechless. No words.
I never ever thought it would be like this, this..amazing master piece, dedicated to me no less! :o I'm in awe of your talent, baby, and I feel..I dun wanna say "awful" cos I know that will make you feel guilty and awful, too, but I feel so completely inadequate cos you wrote me this beautiful piece of love and I can't even make a fitting comment ;~; But I seriously feel like I have no words.
What I do have, however, are tons of tears. So far I've read it 13 times no, not kidding and I have cried every single time ;~; Out of the seven bajillion fics I've read by now that's only happened maybe once or twice before and definitely never one the 2nd read-through.
But this just stirred so many feels it's out of my hands. My heart hurts.
Your beautiful laid-back writing style, the way you go into little details without it ever getting dry or boring, like, Key fidgeting with his cuticles at the cafe. And the way you put me in Tae's head. Sorry, I can't explain what I mean, but somehow your words makes it different. Like, the way he's noticing all the differences between boys and girls.
I love how you kept the start like you showed me, it's a perfect way to "book end" the fic with those paragraphs.
"Taemin’s life completely changes when he’s twenty years old. A certain Kim Kibum is partially to blame." <3
And there is just so much win all over this.
"The song on the radio switches. The sun is hotter. The roads get wider. Everything is changing, and Taemin fucking loves it."
All my feels about why road trips are one of the things I love to do most in this world. For real.
"all he can see is freedom and if it means shabby motels and getting head in bathrooms, then so be it." THAT'S MY BABY. Sucking it up like a pro.
They way Tae observes Key, their banter, Tae wearing the coloured boxers and Key the black ones, Key ofc throwing himself on the side of the bed Tae wanted, the comfortable way Tae just falls asleep right away, Key being all pained on that windowsill not that I like him in pain, but, ya know, the care and concern Key has for him when they're going at it.
"Taemin can’t hold back. He latches onto Kibum’s wrist and yanks him back into his seat, pulling and pulling until he catches Kibum’s lips in an enraged kiss, no lust, all emotion. He doesn’t even care who can see them. He kisses Kibum so forcefully that Kibum whimpers, hands flying up to cup Taemin’s cheek, pressing his chest onto Taemin’s. Taemin’s panting as they pull away, foreheads pressed together." I didn't even get to the question before..
As usual I absolutely LOVED your characters. I know you love them all but you should just do KeyTae exclusively cos the way you describe them is just so fucking amazing idek. They're different in your KeyTaes, yet the same. It's very you pardon the lack of less lame expression.
Taemin being all bratty and suspicious and reluctant, but also intrigued and compassionate and smitten. orz who says smitten? And of course Key would just steamroll his way into Tae's life all confident and diva-like but also not afraid to be honest and reach out. When they have both passion and compassion for each other I don't know what to do with all my feels ;A;
And if you really wrote this with me in mind I should shut up cos it's scary so well you know my taste by now! or maybe we just naturally mesh <3
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"Circling his tongue around the head, Kibum slowly sucks Taemin into his mouth." I swear my breath hitched! And the knot in my stomach is irl ffffffuuu
“Open your mouth.” Remember what I said on your SMTown JongTae? God and you are in the details. This was a such a nice touch.
"Kibum cocks his head, dark eyes sparkling with wicked intent, his smile slow and predatory." I love you <3
But besides all that I'm having so many Korea feels these days and your fic just played right into those. The way your words just makes image upon image play out like a movie in my head and I'm right back to watching the scenery fly by when I drove from Busan to Seoul. Sure, it was on a bus and a lot less sex was involved but it's a very emotional memory for me.
So, yeah, in many ways I think this became about a lot of other stuff, too :'3
I know how you feel about it, but I can understand people bugging you for a sequel (might have an idea..) cos this was absolutely fucking brilliant, and I just never wanted it to end. But I know your fic folders so :P And if you never do a sequel I can pretend they lived happily ever after *u*
And jfc you had to go and add that Chapman lyrics quote, right when I'm back to finally make this sad comment. I fucking love that song..and here I go again ;A;
I love you so much it's not even funneh. ME RN IRL
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WTF lj has a comment chars limit?? XD Who knew.
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MIA HOLY FUCKING SHIT
"now it's getting awkward" omg what are you LIKE GIRL GHDJSAGHDJKSAGDHSAJK
you can't make a fitting comment girl WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT COMMENT THEN OMG ME RN:
you just......omg
13 times holy shit here i'm thinking omg i'm so surprised she's not read it yet? she was so excited? and then....13 times
i'm sorry for making you cry TT_TT
omg i kinda fell in love with that beginning? i couldn't take it out no matter what xD
thank you so much omfg mia GETTING ALL EMOTIONAL HERE
haha you would just LOVE if i only wrote taekey WOULDN'T YOU LMFAO :D
every word is for you baby ;;
i've never been to korea omg i forgot you have things relatable aigo i hope it fits
i love that song too omg, i think that song is a nice theme tune for this fic :D
ugh baby c'mere to mamma <3333
thank you so much ghdjshgdjksghsjkal i love you too omg i'm so glad you loved it ;~;
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This is why it was getting awkward >"< cos I knew you were thinking that, I mean, of course! I would be thinking that :3
And omg nu don't you get all emotional cos I'm all emotional and then we'll all be all emotional and there just won't be enough tissues or cookies in the world for that!!
Hey, and don't be sorry for making me cry. It's not like every tear is necessarily a bad one like that, and it's not like you did something mean, in fact all you did was something amazing <333 I'll happily accept any tears that may follow such awesome writing. I love when writers can touch me like that and reach that far into me.
"every word is for you baby ;;" ohmagaaaaaawdddd ;~~~~~~; I kinda thought you maybe just wrote panda later, to be nice to me, dedicated it to me cos I've been bugging you for KeyTae :3
Okay but seriously, then it really is scary how well you know my taste. Do I really talk that much about it? lol But the whole time I was, like, "omg this is soooo me!", "THEY BOTH TOP ;A;", "this is so good omg!!!", "I love when he does/says that :3", "yesssss ;A;", "ahgsdghjasdjghjaghdhjgfjf fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu *q*", "nuuuu /sobbing forever" ALL THE TIME.
lol and yes, it fit fine maybe except the part about being able to be out of Seoul in fifteen mins! XD Unless he already lived on the outskirts lol But no, like I said, you took me back, not made me wonder what the hell you were going on about so it was great :3
This morning I stayed in bed for two hours thinking about my rec list for real cos this really made me wanna do it! Of course I didn't get around to it cos..well, I'm me! But it will happen, and this will be the first one on there <3
YES PLEASE DO KEYTAE ONLY \o/
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