fic: signal fire (kara/lee) chapter 05
Title: Signal Fire
Rating: PG/PG-13 For some strong language and adult themes.
Spoilers: All Seasons, All Episodes.
Status: Complete (Prologue+11 Chapters+ Epilogue)
Summary: Kara and Lee get one last chance to be together. Begins the moment after Daybreak II, on the hill where Kara didn’t say goodbye.
Special thanks to my sister, ( Read more... )
You've left me a comment! *makes grabby hands* And it's such a lovely one too, thank you so much! You didn't have to go through the trouble but I think it's really sweet of you to.
I find it ironic (and gratifying) that you approve of Kara's portrayal in this chapter. Because, the first time I posted chapter 5 it was a re-worked version where she was less pissed/more crazy. I took some of the earlier chapter comments made about how Papadama was being an ass to Kara per usual to heart and thought I should perhaps further justify his decision to throw Kara in the brig in this chapter by having her snap. Then Tara pointed out how I hadn't had Kara that crazy in previous chapters, and I knew for a fact that I hadn't written her that crazy in the chapters to come. So I thought, why on earth had I messed w/ this one chapter? That's the moment when I realized I was letting feedback write the story for me, pulled chapter 5 and just polished/nitpicked everything off all at the same time. I still think that was a good move since I was far less crazy myself by the time I posted all chapters. I was stressing over silly things way too much.
Wow, that was a really long rambling response. Sorry, Bee! I have a bad habit of getting longwinded about the fic these days. I think it's because comments have slowed down so I have more time to focus on each one.
I'm so pleased that you approve of her reflections Lee-ward. I know he's your boy ;-D and you have a great deal of insight into his character. I do what I can.
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