Comments | mintenergy: fic: signal fire (kara/lee) chapter 02

mintenergy

fic: signal fire (kara/lee) chapter 02

May 06, 2009 20:32

Title: Signal Fire

Rating: PG/PG-13 For some strong language and adult themes.

Spoilers: All Seasons, All Episodes.

Status: Complete (Prologue+11 Chapters+ Epilogue)

Summary: Kara and Lee get one last chance to be together. Begins the moment after Daybreak II, on the hill where Kara didn’t say goodbye.

Special thanks to my sister, ( Read more... )

apollo, starbuck, signal fire, fanfiction

Comments 80

kategirasole May 7 2009, 04:04:56 UTC

Yay--another fabulous chapter!! I'm wondering how Adama's going to respond to Kara's claim...if she really does still know the way to Earth (the good one, not the one from Revelations)...and who they'll find when they get there! And, most importantly, I can't wait to see how/when she and Lee end up together.

Loved it!

mintenergy May 7 2009, 04:18:53 UTC

Aw, thank you BB!

And, most importantly, I can't wait to see how/when she and Lee end up together.

I like your priorities =D

margaretmoony May 7 2009, 04:23:44 UTC

Yay, an update! I love how Kara doesn't know what she do-even though she's from the future.

mintenergy May 7 2009, 04:27:04 UTC

LOL, I totally have the theme song to "Phil of the Future" stuck in my head now. I'm in a very weird mood tonight.

Thank you so much for sticking with this!

bonita_chica71 May 7 2009, 04:29:49 UTC

Girl don't be so hard on yourself. I really enjoyed this chapter, it step up things to come in a great way! :) I miss Sammy. :(

mintenergy May 7 2009, 04:36:05 UTC

Thank you hon. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Do you mean you miss Sammy in reference to this chapter or do you mean you miss him because RDM resigned him to a tub of goo, some incoherent ramblings and a one way trip into the center of the sun? LOL

I honestly think RDM just didn't know what he was doing with any of his own characters by the end.

Anyway, thanks for stopping by =)

bonita_chica71 May 7 2009, 04:48:41 UTC

"..miss him because RDM resigned him to a tub of goo, some incoherent ramblings and a one way trip into the center of the sun". <-I miss him because of that. I could not have said it any better myself...

"I honestly think RDM just didn't know what he was doing with any of his own characters by the end."- I find this funny, because this was apparently comes from a man who had a 'epiphany'while writting it were he said "It's the characters, stupid". I think he just adlibed the 'characters' part. lol *is bitter* ;(

What, No icon love? lol

mintenergy May 7 2009, 05:15:27 UTC

LOL, there is now. I see you up there pretty violet Scar kissage pilots...

justascrewup2 May 7 2009, 04:45:00 UTC

Loving this story so far :) I'm with BC71 - don't be so hard on yourself. I'm very interested to see where this goes next. It's all familiar, but how will it change? Keep up the good work!

mintenergy May 7 2009, 04:49:35 UTC

Thank you so much =) I don't mean to be a downer, I just feel weird every time I post like "okay THIS is the one they'll hate". LOL
Nevertheless I thank you sincerely for reading and taking the time to comment. It makes everything worth it.

callmeonetrack May 7 2009, 05:16:43 UTC

Heh I think everyone feels that way. I know I do!

mintenergy May 7 2009, 06:28:27 UTC

Why is your icon so awesome?

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andacus May 7 2009, 04:47:33 UTC

Oooh, nice way to end a chapter! The scene in the weight room was pretty spot on; I can totally see this happening. Nicely done there. And I think you did a great job with Kara and Sam's discussion. The thing about those two - at least in this rewind universe - is that she's suddenly seeing right where she stands with him and that she does, in fact, love him, but you've made a perfect argument for why she can't be with him. Overall, great characterization continues and the story keeps me interested. :)

mintenergy May 7 2009, 04:54:12 UTC

Okay. Thrilled now.

Thank you to pieces. I wrote the weightr oom scene on my lunch hour today. It wasn't there, there was a shorter scene set somewhere else, and I felt this might be better. So this story...not so complete after all, yeah. =)

Anyhow, extra thanks for mentioning the Sam stuff. That was too tricky for me. I know Kara loves Sam, but I also know he is never going to be enough for her as long as Lee's out there. I thought since she's lived through this to its conclusion, she might have a better understanding of that. Plus, I love Sam (crazy for a K/L shipper? y/n?) so I didn't want to just leave him hanging.

You're awesome, I feel better about this chapter already.

andacus May 7 2009, 05:42:17 UTC

I love Sam too, but I ship the hell out of Kara and Lee. You're not alone!!

I think it was a good call to add that scene in the gym. It worked really well.