ohhhhhhhh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so i was really excited when i first read the summary bc i really like the hunger games!!!!!!!!! but i couldn't remember putting that in my prompts so i went back and checked and i really really like what you did with a vague-ish quote and it works really well here!!!!!!! the way you write is very nice to read?? sorry that's terrible wording.. even though this story is dark it wasn't weighty and i enjoyed reading it the whole time!! your portrayal of jongdae is very different from how i normally picture jongdae in my head but it fits perfectly for this au!! also i loved how you chose a different district and didn't make it a replica of what happens in the books! and... hakyeon... my heart ; n ; junmyeon hyung and lil baby jongin ; AAAA ; i love their relationships!!!!!!! and the last line killed me not only because DEATH!!!!!! but you brought jongin back in ; AAAA ; it hurts, but it fits with the story so i'm okay... masochistic but okay.... i'm sad bc death but it goes along with the unfortunate society present ;; tbh the end is rushed but i can kind of justify it in my head... for minseok, everything leading up to the games was so slow because he was dreading them and then as soon as they began it was pretty much over for him? ;; sorry was that too much like analysis aha.. anyways if you do get the chance to edit/add after reveals i will most definitely be v v excited to read it!! thank you so much for writing this; i'm glad to be the recipient of this fic!!!!!!!!!! :')
thank you so much for reading T___T i'm sorry that it was really rushed, i ran out of time to write it but i promise!!!! i will add more when i crosspost it to my own journal!!! and yeah i woke up in the morning after like a week of mulling over the prompts and i was like "holy shit. holy shit HUNGER GAMES AU!!!!" and i rushed to my computer to start writing it lmao.
thank you so much!! and yeah i was a bit worried over jungda's characterization but i think the one thing that's important is that a) he's practically unbreakable and b) he smiles a lot. so yeah!! the training facility drilled that way of thinking in her head and so.
once i was a bit worried bc i thought it wouldn't be ~original~ enough but!!! im!!!! thank you so much for reading and i'll crosspost the finished version a.s.a.p!!! thank you so much for your prompts!!! if you ever want to follow me *whispers senpai* im kenbin_bot on twitter!!!!
so i was really excited when i first read the summary bc i really like the hunger games!!!!!!!!! but i couldn't remember putting that in my prompts so i went back and checked and i really really like what you did with a vague-ish quote and it works really well here!!!!!!!
the way you write is very nice to read?? sorry that's terrible wording.. even though this story is dark it wasn't weighty and i enjoyed reading it the whole time!!
your portrayal of jongdae is very different from how i normally picture jongdae in my head but it fits perfectly for this au!! also i loved how you chose a different district and didn't make it a replica of what happens in the books!
and... hakyeon... my heart ; n ;
junmyeon hyung and lil baby jongin ; AAAA ; i love their relationships!!!!!!!
and the last line killed me not only because DEATH!!!!!! but you brought jongin back in ; AAAA ; it hurts, but it fits with the story so i'm okay... masochistic but okay.... i'm sad bc death but it goes along with the unfortunate society present ;;
tbh the end is rushed but i can kind of justify it in my head... for minseok, everything leading up to the games was so slow because he was dreading them and then as soon as they began it was pretty much over for him? ;; sorry was that too much like analysis aha.. anyways if you do get the chance to edit/add after reveals i will most definitely be v v excited to read it!! thank you so much for writing this; i'm glad to be the recipient of this fic!!!!!!!!!! :')
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thank you so much for reading T___T i'm sorry that it was really rushed, i ran out of time to write it but i promise!!!! i will add more when i crosspost it to my own journal!!! and yeah i woke up in the morning after like a week of mulling over the prompts and i was like "holy shit. holy shit HUNGER GAMES AU!!!!" and i rushed to my computer to start writing it lmao.
thank you so much!! and yeah i was a bit worried over jungda's characterization but i think the one thing that's important is that a) he's practically unbreakable and b) he smiles a lot. so yeah!! the training facility drilled that way of thinking in her head and so.
once i was a bit worried bc i thought it wouldn't be ~original~ enough but!!! im!!!! thank you so much for reading and i'll crosspost the finished version a.s.a.p!!! thank you so much for your prompts!!! if you ever want to follow me *whispers senpai* im kenbin_bot on twitter!!!!
*hearteu*
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